Hi all, I reviewed the whole diff of the cost calendar draft between version -11 and version -12. The modification looks good to me. I only have one small suggestion:
In the new section 2.1 "Terminology": o Calendar, Cost Calendar: When used with a capital "C", these terms refer to an ALTO Cost Calendar. 'with a capital "C"' may be confusing here. Because the first letters of both "Cost" and "Calendar" are 'C'. People may think "Cost calendar" is also a term. Maybe "with capitalized words" is better? Thanks, Jensen On Fri, Jul 5, 2019 at 3:10 PM Vijay Gurbani <[email protected]> wrote: > One major correction: > > s/The current WGLC will be open until Jul-12-2019/The current WGLC will be > open until Jul-21-2019/ > > The current WGLC will proceed until Jul-21-2019. > > Thanks. > > On Fri, Jul 5, 2019 at 1:53 PM Vijay Gurbani <[email protected] > <[email protected]>> wrote: > >> All: The chairs will like to start a second WGLC for >> draft-ietf-alto-cost-calendar-12 [0]. >> >> During the first WGLC, a couple of discusses were raised as documented in >> [1]. More specifically, >> >> 1/ Ben indicated a couple of edge cases that need to be resolved. >> 2/ Alvaro noted that there is IPR tied to the precursor of this draft, as >> detailed in [2]. The chairs will like to ensure that the WG is aware of >> the IPR declaration inherited by draft-ietf-alto-cost-calendar, and duly >> considers it during the second WGLC. >> >> Version -12 of the document (the one being WGLC'd) addresses the IESG >> discusses and comments, as well as a review by one of the chairs (Vijay). >> >> The current WGLC will be open until Jul-12-2019 (the start of the IETF >> week). Please post your comments on this draft to the WG mailing list, >> even if the comment is simply to say that you support (or not) moving this >> work ahead. >> >> The chairs will summarize the status of the draft at the end of WGLC >> period. >> >> [0] https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-alto-cost-calendar-12 >> [1] >> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-alto-cost-calendar/ballot/ >> [2] >> https://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/search/?submit=draft&id=draft-ietf-alto-cost-calendar >> >> Thank you. >> >> - vijay >> > _______________________________________________ > alto mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/alto >
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