Hi Sabine and all, I reviewed the diff between -11 and -12. The changes generally look good but I spotted some minor issues:
- Title of Section 3.1: resources -> resource or resource's. - In the first sentence of the last paragraph in section 2.4, the term "cost Calendar" should be capitalized. - In Section 4.1 and Section 5, some contents are using "ALTO client" instead of "ALTO Client". Best, Kai On Sat, Jul 20, 2019 at 11:51 AM Jensen Zhang <[email protected]> wrote: > Hi all, > > I reviewed the whole diff of the cost calendar draft between version -11 > and version -12. The modification looks good to me. I only have one small > suggestion: > > In the new section 2.1 "Terminology": > > o Calendar, Cost Calendar: When used with a capital "C", these terms > > refer to an ALTO Cost Calendar. > > > 'with a capital "C"' may be confusing here. Because the first letters of both > "Cost" and "Calendar" are 'C'. People may think "Cost calendar" is also a > term. Maybe "with capitalized words" is better? > > > Thanks, > Jensen > > > On Fri, Jul 5, 2019 at 3:10 PM Vijay Gurbani <[email protected]> > wrote: > >> One major correction: >> >> s/The current WGLC will be open until Jul-12-2019/The current WGLC will >> be open until Jul-21-2019/ >> >> The current WGLC will proceed until Jul-21-2019. >> >> Thanks. >> >> On Fri, Jul 5, 2019 at 1:53 PM Vijay Gurbani <[email protected] >> <[email protected]>> wrote: >> >>> All: The chairs will like to start a second WGLC for >>> draft-ietf-alto-cost-calendar-12 [0]. >>> >>> During the first WGLC, a couple of discusses were raised as documented >>> in [1]. More specifically, >>> >>> 1/ Ben indicated a couple of edge cases that need to be resolved. >>> 2/ Alvaro noted that there is IPR tied to the precursor of this draft, >>> as detailed in [2]. The chairs will like to ensure that the WG is aware of >>> the IPR declaration inherited by draft-ietf-alto-cost-calendar, and duly >>> considers it during the second WGLC. >>> >>> Version -12 of the document (the one being WGLC'd) addresses the IESG >>> discusses and comments, as well as a review by one of the chairs (Vijay). >>> >>> The current WGLC will be open until Jul-12-2019 (the start of the IETF >>> week). Please post your comments on this draft to the WG mailing list, >>> even if the comment is simply to say that you support (or not) moving this >>> work ahead. >>> >>> The chairs will summarize the status of the draft at the end of WGLC >>> period. >>> >>> [0] https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-alto-cost-calendar-12 >>> [1] >>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-alto-cost-calendar/ballot/ >>> [2] >>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/search/?submit=draft&id=draft-ietf-alto-cost-calendar >>> >>> Thank you. >>> >>> - vijay >>> >> _______________________________________________ >> alto mailing list >> [email protected] >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/alto >> > _______________________________________________ > alto mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/alto >
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