Hi Sabine, I have a quick additional comment:
I believe that an example (sec. 9) of Aggregated Entity Domain is missing. Perhaps you could re-use (or extend) the IRD example [0] and try to add a couple of sentences to indicate equivalent entity property mappings (see slide 17, 18 in [1]). Best regards, Danny Lachos [0] https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-09#page-28 [1] https://datatracker.ietf.org/meeting/105/materials/slides-105-alto-unified-properties-for-the-alto-protocol-02.pdf On Tue, Sep 24, 2019 at 10:42 AM Randriamasy, Sabine (Nokia - FR/Paris-Saclay) <[email protected]> wrote: > Hi Danny, > > > > Many thanks for your review. I saw your last comment is in Section 9.7. > > Should we consider that until section 9.7 your review is complete or will > you have more questions? > > We look forward to your other comments, > > Best regards, > > Sabine > > > > > > *From:* alto <[email protected]> *On Behalf Of *Danny Alex Lachos > Perez > *Sent:* Tuesday, September 17, 2019 8:28 PM > *To:* IETF ALTO <[email protected]> > *Cc:* [email protected] > *Subject:* Re: [alto] I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-09.txt > > > > Dear authors, > > > > I started to read the “*Unified Properties for the ALTO Protocol*” draft > (-09). > > > > Please, see my first comments in the attached file (search for '[DANNY]').. > > Many of them are suggestions about clarity and format issues . > > > > I will continue the review and send additional comments in a short time. > > > Best regards, > > > > Danny Lachos > > > > > > On Wed, Sep 4, 2019 at 10:41 AM <[email protected]> wrote: > > > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts > directories. > This draft is a work item of the Application-Layer Traffic Optimization WG > of the IETF. > > Title : Unified Properties for the ALTO Protocol > Authors : Wendy Roome > Sabine Randriamasy > Y. Richard Yang > Jingxuan Jensen Zhang > Kai Gao > Filename : draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-09.txt > Pages : 43 > Date : 2019-09-04 > > Abstract: > This document extends the Application-Layer Traffic Optimization > (ALTO) Protocol [RFC7285] by generalizing the concept of "endpoint > properties" to generic types of entities, and by presenting those > properties as maps, similar to the network and cost maps in > [RFC7285]. > > > > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new/ > > There are also htmlized versions available at: > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-09 > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-09 > > A diff from the previous version is available at: > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-09 > > > Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of > submission > until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org. > > Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: > ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ > > _______________________________________________ > alto mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/alto > >
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