Please remove me from the mailing list! ________________________________ From: alto <[email protected]> on behalf of Danny Alex Lachos Perez <[email protected]> Sent: Wednesday, September 25, 2019 9:50 AM To: Randriamasy, Sabine (Nokia - FR/Paris-Saclay) <[email protected]> Cc: IETF ALTO <[email protected]> Subject: Re: [alto] I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-09.txt
Hi Sabine, I have a quick additional comment: I believe that an example (sec. 9) of Aggregated Entity Domain is missing. Perhaps you could re-use (or extend) the IRD example [0] and try to add a couple of sentences to indicate equivalent entity property mappings (see slide 17, 18 in [1]). Best regards, Danny Lachos [0] https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-09#page-28<https://nam05.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Ftools..ietf.org%2Fhtml%2Fdraft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-09%23page-28&data=02%7C01%7Cabraham.silberschatz%40yale.edu%7Cf293677b81b746f9a96c08d741bf5d1b%7Cdd8cbebb21394df8b4114e3e87abeb5c%7C0%7C1%7C637050162478157886&sdata=WFd3vs%2F1mNSTREXwtx%2Fyz8Shf0KRqvsYiMzphaLMqZM%3D&reserved=0> [1] https://datatracker.ietf.org/meeting/105/materials/slides-105-alto-unified-properties-for-the-alto-protocol-02.pdf<https://nam05.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fdatatracker.ietf.org%2Fmeeting%2F105%2Fmaterials%2Fslides-105-alto-unified-properties-for-the-alto-protocol-02.pdf&data=02%7C01%7Cabraham.silberschatz%40yale.edu%7Cf293677b81b746f9a96c08d741bf5d1b%7Cdd8cbebb21394df8b4114e3e87abeb5c%7C0%7C1%7C637050162478167884&sdata=5lNDJ9BpKFgYvllzNe1cVCpFS%2FE53hHCHK74zX6tteI%3D&reserved=0> On Tue, Sep 24, 2019 at 10:42 AM Randriamasy, Sabine (Nokia - FR/Paris-Saclay) <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> wrote: Hi Danny, Many thanks for your review. I saw your last comment is in Section 9.7. Should we consider that until section 9.7 your review is complete or will you have more questions? We look forward to your other comments, Best regards, Sabine From: alto <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> On Behalf Of Danny Alex Lachos Perez Sent: Tuesday, September 17, 2019 8:28 PM To: IETF ALTO <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> Cc: [email protected]<mailto:[email protected]> Subject: Re: [alto] I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-09..txt Dear authors, I started to read the “Unified Properties for the ALTO Protocol” draft (-09). Please, see my first comments in the attached file (search for '[DANNY]'). Many of them are suggestions about clarity and format issues . I will continue the review and send additional comments in a short time. Best regards, Danny Lachos On Wed, Sep 4, 2019 at 10:41 AM <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> wrote: A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories. This draft is a work item of the Application-Layer Traffic Optimization WG of the IETF. Title : Unified Properties for the ALTO Protocol Authors : Wendy Roome Sabine Randriamasy Y. Richard Yang Jingxuan Jensen Zhang Kai Gao Filename : draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-09.txt Pages : 43 Date : 2019-09-04 Abstract: This document extends the Application-Layer Traffic Optimization (ALTO) Protocol [RFC7285] by generalizing the concept of "endpoint properties" to generic types of entities, and by presenting those properties as maps, similar to the network and cost maps in [RFC7285]. 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