Hi Adrian, Many thanks for your early review and quick comments.
On Mon, May 22, 2023 at 6:41 AM Adrian Farrel <[email protected]> wrote: > Hi, > > > > I looked at revision -07 > > > > This is a really big document and would probably benefit from a more > detailed review than I was able to give it. But it looks fine and ready to > progress to me. > > > > A couple of nits… > > > > Section 4.3 might usefully describe that this is an additional requirement. > Although we have mentioned this in the subsection title, we will also describe this in the text. > > > You might reference draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6991-bis instead of RFC6991. > You’ll be behind it in the queue, so you can safely use it as a normative > reference. That’ll be a bit more future-proof. > Many thanks for the reminder. We will update the reference. Thanks, Jensen > > > Cheers, > > Adrian > > > > > > > > > > *From:* alto <[email protected]> *On Behalf Of *Jordi Ros Giralt > *Sent:* 17 May 2023 06:41 > *To:* [email protected] > *Subject:* [alto] Call for volunteers to review 2nd WGLC for ALTO docs > > > > Hi ALTO WG: > > > > As you know, we are in the process of issuing the 2nd WGLC for two of the > ALTO drafts (New Transport and OAM). Thank you to all of you who have been > working hard to help get these documents completed, including all the > detailed feedback provided by reviewers during the first WGLC. > > > > There is now a need (as mentioned by the chairs) to have as many eyes & > volunteers review the docs to make sure they are in the best possible > shape. I can volunteer to review both documents. Richard also volunteered, > thank you Richard. We would like to suggest targeting two more volunteers. > Could any of you help support this work? > > > > We are targeting 22/05 to complete this new round of revisions, as that's > the target day for the 2nd WGLC. > > > > These are the docs: > > > > - New Transport: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-alto-new-transport/ > > - OAM: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang/ > > > > Please feel free to forward this email if you know others (inside or > ouside ALTO) who can help review the docs too. > > > > As we are working to wrap up the current charter, this is very important > work to ensure the quality of the documents produced by ALTO. Thank you for > your collaboration. > > > > Jordi, on behalf of ALTO > > > _______________________________________________ > alto mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/alto >
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