On Mon, May 20, 2013 at 5:18 PM, Mike Wolfson <[email protected]> wrote:
> I hope it tells the story (give me feedback and let me know). > Nice video. Reminds me I need to redo mine. Some feedback: 1 - The very first screen has several lines of text but is only on screen for about 1 second. Maybe I'm slow, but I couldn't read that fast. Consider leaving that up a second or two longer. 2 - Ironically, I didn't see much of the actual app itself. And when I did, they were small images. It's a *video* - I'd expect to see the app in action to coincide with whatever you're describing. 3 - I found the music very distracting. My brain is trying to read the text on the screen while also trying to listen to and process the lyrics of the song that's playing. I would recommend lowering the volume significantly or switching to something that's just music and no lyrics. I'm definitely no video or marketing expert - just some food for thought from a user's / viewer's perspective. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- TreKing <http://sites.google.com/site/rezmobileapps/treking> - Chicago transit tracking app for Android-powered devices -- You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "Android Discuss" group. To unsubscribe from this group and stop receiving emails from it, send an email to [email protected]. To post to this group, send email to [email protected]. Visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/android-discuss?hl=en. For more options, visit https://groups.google.com/groups/opt_out.
