I would second TreKing's three points and also add that I felt the page transitions looked rather dated, distracting and unnecessary. I would prefer a simple fade-out/fade-in, or if you want it more punchy, maybe slide out to left each time.
On a related note - these days, what is the best way to do a video showing the app itself in action? I don't want to use a video camera! On 21 May 2013 07:45, TreKing <[email protected]> wrote: > > On Mon, May 20, 2013 at 5:18 PM, Mike Wolfson <[email protected]> wrote: > >> I hope it tells the story (give me feedback and let me know). >> > > Nice video. Reminds me I need to redo mine. Some feedback: > > 1 - The very first screen has several lines of text but is only on screen > for about 1 second. Maybe I'm slow, but I couldn't read that fast. Consider > leaving that up a second or two longer. > 2 - Ironically, I didn't see much of the actual app itself. And when I > did, they were small images. It's a *video* - I'd expect to see the app > in action to coincide with whatever you're describing. > 3 - I found the music very distracting. My brain is trying to read the > text on the screen while also trying to listen to and process the lyrics of > the song that's playing. I would recommend lowering the volume > significantly or switching to something that's just music and no lyrics. > > I'm definitely no video or marketing expert - just some food for thought > from a user's / viewer's perspective. > > > ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- > TreKing <http://sites.google.com/site/rezmobileapps/treking> - Chicago > transit tracking app for Android-powered devices > > -- > You received this message because you are subscribed to a topic in the > Google Groups "Android Discuss" group. > To unsubscribe from this topic, visit > https://groups.google.com/d/topic/android-discuss/XGha8fwY3xU/unsubscribe?hl=en > . > To unsubscribe from this group and all its topics, send an email to > [email protected]. > To post to this group, send email to [email protected]. > Visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/android-discuss?hl=en. > For more options, visit https://groups.google.com/groups/opt_out. > > > -- You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "Android Discuss" group. To unsubscribe from this group and stop receiving emails from it, send an email to [email protected]. To post to this group, send email to [email protected]. Visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/android-discuss?hl=en. For more options, visit https://groups.google.com/groups/opt_out.
