Hi,

Thanks to Michael Richardson, we have found some important nits in the GRASP 
examples in the ACP draft. The CDDL syntax is correct, but the examples need to 
be corrected as below. The errors are in nesting levels within the flood 
message, and the naming
of constants.

The draft is already in "Revised I-D Needed" so this can easily be fixed in the 
next draft.

In Figure 3:

OLD:

        [M_FLOOD, 12340815, h'fd89b714f3db0000200000064000001', 210000,
            ["SRV.est", 4, 255 ],
            [O_IPv6_LOCATOR,
                 h'fd89b714f3db0000200000064000001', TCP, 443]
        ]

NEW:

        [M_FLOOD, 12340815, h'fd89b714f3db0000200000064000001', 210000,
           [["SRV.est", 4, 255 ],
            [O_IPv6_LOCATOR,
                 h'fd89b714f3db0000200000064000001', IPPROTO_TCP, 443]]
        ]


In Figure 5:

OLD:

        [M_FLOOD, 12340815, h'fe80000000000000c0011001feef0000', 210000,
            ["AN_ACP", 4, 1, "IKEv2" ],
            [O_IPv6_LOCATOR,
                 h'fe80000000000000c0011001feef0000', UDP, 15000]
            ["AN_ACP", 4, 1, "DTLS" ],
            [O_IPv6_LOCATOR,
                 h'fe80000000000000c0011001feef0000', UDP, 17000]
        ]

NEW:

        [M_FLOOD, 12340815, h'fe80000000000000c0011001feef0000', 210000,
           [["AN_ACP", 4, 1, "IKEv2" ],
            [O_IPv6_LOCATOR,
                 h'fe80000000000000c0011001feef0000', IPPROTO_UDP, 15000]],
           [["AN_ACP", 4, 1, "DTLS" ],
            [O_IPv6_LOCATOR,
                 h'fe80000000000000c0011001feef0000', IPPROTO_UDP, 17000]]
        ]

Regards
   Brian

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