Certified: both these examples are now correct in the -25 draft. Thanks Brian
On 28-Apr-20 13:44, Brian E Carpenter wrote: > Hi, > > Thanks to Michael Richardson, we have found some important nits in the GRASP > examples in the ACP draft. The CDDL syntax is correct, but the examples need > to be corrected as below. The errors are in nesting levels within the flood > message, and the naming > of constants. > > The draft is already in "Revised I-D Needed" so this can easily be fixed in > the next draft. > > In Figure 3: > > OLD: > > [M_FLOOD, 12340815, h'fd89b714f3db0000200000064000001', 210000, > ["SRV.est", 4, 255 ], > [O_IPv6_LOCATOR, > h'fd89b714f3db0000200000064000001', TCP, 443] > ] > > NEW: > > [M_FLOOD, 12340815, h'fd89b714f3db0000200000064000001', 210000, > [["SRV.est", 4, 255 ], > [O_IPv6_LOCATOR, > h'fd89b714f3db0000200000064000001', IPPROTO_TCP, 443]] > ] > > > In Figure 5: > > OLD: > > [M_FLOOD, 12340815, h'fe80000000000000c0011001feef0000', 210000, > ["AN_ACP", 4, 1, "IKEv2" ], > [O_IPv6_LOCATOR, > h'fe80000000000000c0011001feef0000', UDP, 15000] > ["AN_ACP", 4, 1, "DTLS" ], > [O_IPv6_LOCATOR, > h'fe80000000000000c0011001feef0000', UDP, 17000] > ] > > NEW: > > [M_FLOOD, 12340815, h'fe80000000000000c0011001feef0000', 210000, > [["AN_ACP", 4, 1, "IKEv2" ], > [O_IPv6_LOCATOR, > h'fe80000000000000c0011001feef0000', IPPROTO_UDP, 15000]], > [["AN_ACP", 4, 1, "DTLS" ], > [O_IPv6_LOCATOR, > h'fe80000000000000c0011001feef0000', IPPROTO_UDP, 17000]] > ] > > Regards > Brian > _______________________________________________ Anima mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/anima
