Yes, sorry, i am working on it... *sigh*... On Tue, May 19, 2020 at 08:46:14AM +1200, Brian E Carpenter wrote: > Hi, will there be an update with these corrections soon? The draft has been > "Waiting for AD Go-Ahead::Revised I-D Needed " for 27 days. > > Regards > Brian Carpenter > > On 28-Apr-20 13:44, Brian E Carpenter wrote: > > Hi, > > > > Thanks to Michael Richardson, we have found some important nits in the > > GRASP examples in the ACP draft. The CDDL syntax is correct, but the > > examples need to be corrected as below. The errors are in nesting levels > > within the flood message, and the naming > > of constants. > > > > The draft is already in "Revised I-D Needed" so this can easily be fixed in > > the next draft. > > > > In Figure 3: > > > > OLD: > > > > [M_FLOOD, 12340815, h'fd89b714f3db0000200000064000001', 210000, > > ["SRV.est", 4, 255 ], > > [O_IPv6_LOCATOR, > > h'fd89b714f3db0000200000064000001', TCP, 443] > > ] > > > > NEW: > > > > [M_FLOOD, 12340815, h'fd89b714f3db0000200000064000001', 210000, > > [["SRV.est", 4, 255 ], > > [O_IPv6_LOCATOR, > > h'fd89b714f3db0000200000064000001', IPPROTO_TCP, 443]] > > ] > > > > > > In Figure 5: > > > > OLD: > > > > [M_FLOOD, 12340815, h'fe80000000000000c0011001feef0000', 210000, > > ["AN_ACP", 4, 1, "IKEv2" ], > > [O_IPv6_LOCATOR, > > h'fe80000000000000c0011001feef0000', UDP, 15000] > > ["AN_ACP", 4, 1, "DTLS" ], > > [O_IPv6_LOCATOR, > > h'fe80000000000000c0011001feef0000', UDP, 17000] > > ] > > > > NEW: > > > > [M_FLOOD, 12340815, h'fe80000000000000c0011001feef0000', 210000, > > [["AN_ACP", 4, 1, "IKEv2" ], > > [O_IPv6_LOCATOR, > > h'fe80000000000000c0011001feef0000', IPPROTO_UDP, 15000]], > > [["AN_ACP", 4, 1, "DTLS" ], > > [O_IPv6_LOCATOR, > > h'fe80000000000000c0011001feef0000', IPPROTO_UDP, 17000]] > > ] > > > > Regards > > Brian > >
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