I really don’t care about Capitalization or not… I’ll leave that to the lawyers 
and grammarians.

Owen


> On Dec 18, 2023, at 13:15, Matthew Wilder <[email protected]> wrote:
> 
> Hi Owen,
> 
> Thank you for the initial feedback. 
> 
> Do you have any feedback regarding the suggestion to capitalize the term 
> "Community Networks" where it occurs in this section to reference the Section 
> 2 definition that exists?
> 
> Thanks,
> Matthew Wilder
> 
> 
> On Mon, Dec 18, 2023 at 12:23 PM Owen DeLong <[email protected] 
> <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:
>> I don’t favor striking the first paragraph. While the topics are out of 
>> scope for policy, they provide a good record of the rationale behind this 
>> otherwise strange carveout. Losing the rationale would likely eventually 
>> lead to losing track of why the policy exists, potentially resulting in loss 
>> of the policy.
>> 
>> Owen
>> 
>> 
>>> On Dec 18, 2023, at 11:25, Matthew Wilder via ARIN-PPML <[email protected] 
>>> <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:
>>> 
>>> Hello community members,
>>> 
>>> Thank you to everyone who has provided inputs for the working group's 
>>> consideration with regard to Section 6 policies. There have been great 
>>> discussions that we as a working group (and Advisory Council more broadly) 
>>> are taking note of.
>>> 
>>> In the final Section 6 topic that the NRPM Working Group wishes to bring to 
>>> the community's attention, we will be looking at 6.5.9 Community Network 
>>> Allocations.
>>> 
>>> We wonder if it might be beneficial to strike the entire first paragraph, 
>>> which provides some context which is somewhat beyond the scope of policy 
>>> (for instance mentioning the budgets of community networks). The material 
>>> bits of policy do not appear to reside in that paragraph, and this 
>>> paragraph reads to us more like a problem statement rather than policy.
>>> 
>>> Additionally we would like to suggest the capitalization of all instances 
>>> of "Community Networks" in the entire section and its subsections to 
>>> properly reference the definition of this term found in section 2.
>>> 
>>> We very much appreciate your consideration and any feedback you have to 
>>> these suggestions as we measure what actions we might take to improve 
>>> Section 6.
>>> 
>>> Best regards,
>>> 
>>> Matthew Wilder
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