Jim Van Meggelen wrote:
This sentence is awkward because it repeats a word ("experience"):
"TAUG brings together an invaluable collection of experienced individuals
who have experience in everything from Residential VoIP service through Call
Centre deployments to small-office PBX setups"
I would re-word it to read:
"TAUG brings together an enthusiastic group of professionals who have
experience in many disciplines, including Residential, Small-Medium
Business, Large Enterprise, Call-Centre, Carrier and ISP (to name a few)."
Thanks: I ultimately went with mostly your wording:
TAUG brings together an enthusiastic collection of individuals who have
experience in many disciplines, including Residential, Small-Medium
Business, Large Enterprise, Call-Centre, Carrier and ISP (to name a
few). You can talk face-to-face with the people who are doing exactly
the kinds of things you need to do.
Ian
