* Paul Hoffman <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> [2007-06-20 00:40]:
> At 1:59 PM -0700 6/19/07, Tim Bray wrote:
> >On Jun 19, 2007, at 1:50 PM, James M Snell wrote:
> >>  Because servers allow allowed (and in some cases required)
> >>  to modify the contents of an Entry Document before
> >>  publishing it, signatures within an entry will likely only
> >>  be useful to the server to which it is being sent. Clients
> >>  cannot assume that the signature will be valid when viewed
> >>  by a third part, or that the server will event publish
> >>  client's signature.
> >
> >I think that's an improvement.  -T
> 
> s/third part/third party/
> s/event publish/even publish the/

Also:

s/allow allowed/are allowed/

:-)

Regards,
-- 
Aristotle Pagaltzis // <http://plasmasturm.org/>

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