Hi!

All good with what Tony wrote, but perhaps here...

On 21.01.2025 21:37, Tony Li wrote:
  The goal of the routing architecture is to provide an organizational
   structure to protocols running on the satellite network such that
   topology information is conveyed through relevant portions of the
   network, paths are computed across the network, data
   can be delivered along those paths, and the structure can scale
   without any changes to the organizational structure.

That sentence is a mouthful and there's a very minor tense problem.  I think you're being just a bit too terse, but I won't stand on my head on this.  Do you want to take another swing?

Eliot
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