Hi Carsten,

Thank you for your reply! We have made your requested updates and noted your 
approval on the AUTH48 status page (see 
https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9781).

The updated files have been posted here (please refresh):
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9781.txt
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9781.pdf
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9781.html
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9781.xml

The updated diffs have been posted here:
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9781-diff.html
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9781-rfcdiff.html (side by side)
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9781-auth48diff.html
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9781-auth48rfcdiff.html (side by side)

Once we receive approvals from Henk, Nancy, and Jeremy, we will move this 
document forward in the publication process.

Thanks!
RFC Editor/mc

> On May 10, 2025, at 2:42 PM, Carsten Bormann <c...@tzi.org> wrote:
> 
> On 2025-05-07, at 18:00, Madison Church <mchu...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote:
>> 
>> We will await approvals from each author prior to moving forward in the 
>> publication process.
> 
> I have two more:
> 
> (1)
> (Section 4):
> 
> OLD:
> When a UCCS emerges from the Secure Channel and into the receiver, the 
> security properties of the secure channel no longer protect the UCCS, which 
> now are subject to the same security properties as any other unprotected data 
> in the Verifier environment. If the receiver subsequently forwards UCCS, they 
> are treated as though they originated within the receiver.
> 
> NEW:
> When a UCCS emerges from the Secure Channel and into the receiver, the 
> security properties of the secure channel no longer protect the UCCS, which 
> now is subject 
> _______________________________________________________________________^
> to the same security properties as any other unprotected data in the Verifier 
> environment. If the receiver subsequently forwards UCCS, they are treated as 
> though they originated within the receiver.
> 
> 
> The “which" points to the (now singular) UCCS, not the security properties 
> (which aren’t subject to security properties!).  Sorry for misleading with my 
> original suggestion.
> 
> 
> (2)
> I note that since the acronym “CWT” no longer is in the title, it probably 
> should be added to the keywords.
> 
> 
> With these two changes, RFC-to-be 9781 is now ready for publication.
> 
> Grüße, Carsten
> 

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