Hi,
I am good with this version and approve moving it forward.  Thank you all for 
pushing this through.

Best, Nancy

From: Madison Church <mchu...@staff.rfc-editor.org>
Date: Tuesday, May 13, 2025 at 6:48 AM
To: Carsten Bormann <c...@tzi.org>, Henk Birkholz <henk.birkholz@ietf.contact>, 
Nancy Cam-Winget (ncamwing) <ncamw...@cisco.com>, Jeremy O'Donoghue 
<jodon...@qti.qualcomm.com>
Cc: RFC Editor <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>, rats-...@ietf.org 
<rats-...@ietf.org>, rats-chairs <rats-cha...@ietf.org>, 
kathleen.moriarty.i...@gmail.com <kathleen.moriarty.i...@gmail.com>, Roman 
Danyliw <r...@cert.org>, auth48archive@rfc-editor.org 
<auth48archive@rfc-editor.org>
Subject: Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9781 <draft-ietf-rats-uccs-12> for your 
review
Hi Carsten,

Thank you for your reply! We have made your requested updates and noted your 
approval on the AUTH48 status page (see 
https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9781).

The updated files have been posted here (please refresh):
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9781.txt
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9781.pdf
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9781.html
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9781.xml

The updated diffs have been posted here:
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9781-diff.html
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9781-rfcdiff.html (side by side)
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9781-auth48diff.html
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9781-auth48rfcdiff.html (side by side)

Once we receive approvals from Henk, Nancy, and Jeremy, we will move this 
document forward in the publication process.

Thanks!
RFC Editor/mc

> On May 10, 2025, at 2:42 PM, Carsten Bormann <c...@tzi.org> wrote:
>
> On 2025-05-07, at 18:00, Madison Church <mchu...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote:
>>
>> We will await approvals from each author prior to moving forward in the 
>> publication process.
>
> I have two more:
>
> (1)
> (Section 4):
>
> OLD:
> When a UCCS emerges from the Secure Channel and into the receiver, the 
> security properties of the secure channel no longer protect the UCCS, which 
> now are subject to the same security properties as any other unprotected data 
> in the Verifier environment. If the receiver subsequently forwards UCCS, they 
> are treated as though they originated within the receiver.
>
> NEW:
> When a UCCS emerges from the Secure Channel and into the receiver, the 
> security properties of the secure channel no longer protect the UCCS, which 
> now is subject
> _______________________________________________________________________^
> to the same security properties as any other unprotected data in the Verifier 
> environment. If the receiver subsequently forwards UCCS, they are treated as 
> though they originated within the receiver.
>
>
> The “which" points to the (now singular) UCCS, not the security properties 
> (which aren’t subject to security properties!).  Sorry for misleading with my 
> original suggestion.
>
>
> (2)
> I note that since the acronym “CWT” no longer is in the title, it probably 
> should be added to the keywords.
>
>
> With these two changes, RFC-to-be 9781 is now ready for publication.
>
> Grüße, Carsten
>
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