Hi Stuart and Ted, Thank you for your reply. We have updated the document accordingly.
We have one remaining question, regarding: > * I don’t think writing “a <proper-noun>” is right. We wouldn’t write > “Implementations of *a* TCP” or “Implementations of *a* DHCP”. > > OLD: > Implementations of a > traditional DNS Update [RFC2136] do not normally provide a way to > enforce a constraint of this type. > NEW: > Implementations of > traditional DNS Update [RFC2136] do not normally provide a way to > enforce a constraint of this type. We hesitate to make this change as it currently reads "Implementations of a traditional DNS Update" (a traditional ... Update) and not "Implementations of a traditional DNS" (a traditional DNS). Would you like to remove both "Update" and "a"? CURRENT: Implementations of a traditional DNS Update [RFC2136] do not normally provide a way to enforce a constraint of this type. NEW: Implementations of traditional DNS [RFC2136] do not normally provide a way to enforce a constraint of this type. The updated files have been posted here (please refresh): https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9665.txt https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9665.pdf https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9665.html https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9665.xml The relevant diff files have been posted here (please refresh): https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9665-diff.html (comprehensive diff) https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9665-auth48diff.html (AUTH48 changes only) Note that it may be necessary for you to refresh your browser to view the most recent version. For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see: https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9665 Thank you, RFC Editor/st > On May 29, 2025, at 11:09 PM, Stuart Cheshire <chesh...@apple.com> wrote: > > One correction. In my last email I missed the word “Section”. > > OLD: > <xref target="RFC1035" section="3.5" sectionFormat="of"/> > <xref target="RFC3596" section="2.5" sectionFormat="of"/> > > NEW: > Section <xref target="RFC1035" section="3.5" sectionFormat="bare"/> > Section <xref target="RFC3596" section="2.5" sectionFormat="bare”/ > > Stuart Cheshire > -- auth48archive mailing list -- auth48archive@rfc-editor.org To unsubscribe send an email to auth48archive-le...@rfc-editor.org
