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Thank you, RFC Editor/st > On Jun 27, 2025, at 5:13 PM, rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org wrote: > > Authors, > > While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as necessary) > the following questions, which are also in the XML file. > > 1) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that appear in > the title) for use on https://www.rfc-editor.org/search. --> > > > 2) <!-- [rfced] Do the extensions define or does this specification define "a > set > of additional Capability Objects..."? > > Current: > The Content Delivery Network Interconnection (CDNI) Capacity > Capability Advertisement Extensions define a set of additional > Capability Objects that provide information about current downstream > CDN (dCDN) utilization and specified usage limits to the delegating > upstream CDN (uCDN) in order to inform traffic delegation decisions. > > Perhaps: > This specification defines a set of additional > Capability Objects that provide information about current downstream > CDN (dCDN) utilization and specified usage limits to the delegating > upstream CDN (uCDN) in order to inform traffic delegation decisions. > --> > > > 3) <!--[rfced] There are several lists for properties throughout the > document. If the "Type" and "Mandatory-to-Specify" fields only > contain one word and a period, may we remove the period? We note > that this document follows the formatting style in RFC 8008; > however, our current practice is to remove the punctuation if a > description only contains one word (see similar examples in RFCs > 9538 and 9677). Please let us know your preference. > > One example > > Current: > Property: type > > Description: A valid telemetry source type (see Section 2.1.1.1). > > Type: String. > > Mandatory-to-Specify: Yes. > > Perhaps: > Property: type > > Description: A valid telemetry source type (see Section 2.1.1.1). > > Type: String > > Mandatory-to-Specify: Yes > --> > > > 4) <!--[rfced] For consistency, should "Telemetry Capability" be updated > as "the Telemetry Capability Object" in the following sentence? > > Original: > The following shows an example of a Telemetry Capability > including two metrics for a source, that is scoped to > a footprint. > > Perhaps: > The following shows an example of a Telemetry Capability Object, > including two metrics for a source, that is scoped to > a footprint. > --> > > > 5) <!--[rfced] We note that Table 1 includes a description of the > "generic" source type, whereas Table 4 and the IANA registry do > not. Should the description be added to Table 4 and the IANA > registry? In Section 2.1.1.1, should Table 1 be replaced with a > link to Table 4 to avoid duplication? > > Current (Section 2.1.1.1): > At the time of this writing, the registry of valid Telemetry Source > Object types is limited to a single type: Generic (see > Section 3.2.1). > > Perhaps A: > At the time of this writing, the registry of valid Telemetry Source > Types is limited to a single type: generic (see Table 4 in Section 3.2.1). > or > > Perhaps B: > At the time of this writing, the "CDNI Telemetry Source Types" registry > is limited to a single type: generic (see Table 4 in Section 3.2.1). > > ... > Current (Section 3.2): > +=============+===========+ > | Source Type | Reference | > +=============+===========+ > | generic | RFC 9808 | > +=============+===========+ > Table 4 > > Perhaps: > +=============+=======================================+===========+ > | Source Type | Description | Reference | > +=============+=======================================+===========+ > | generic | An object that allows for | RFC 9808 | > | | advertisement of generic data sources | | > +=============+=======================================+===========+ > Table 4 > --> > > > 6) <!-- [rfced] We note that the following reference entries are not > cited anywhere in the document. These entries will be removed > prior to publication, unless you would like to let us know where > they may be added in the text. > > [OC-CII] Ryan, A., Ed., Rosenblum, B., Goldstein, G., Roskin, R., > and G. Bichot, "Open Caching Capacity Insights - > Functional Specification (Placeholder before > publication)", <https://www.svta.org/document/open- > caching-capacity-interface/>. > > [OC-RR] Finkelman, O., Ed., Hofmann, J., Klein, E., Mishra, S., > Ma, K., Sahar, D., and B. Zurat, "Open Caching Request > Routing - Functional Specification", Version 1.1, 4 > October 2019, <https://www.svta.org/product/open-cache- > request-routing-functional-specification/>. > > [OCWG] "Open Caching Home Page", <https://opencaching.svta.org/>. > --> > > > 7) <!-- [rfced] Terminology > > a) Throughout the text, the following terminology appears to be used > inconsistently. Please review these occurrences and let us know if/how they > may be made consistent. > > capability object type > Capability Objects > > capacity limit-types > Capacity Limits > CDNI Capacity Limit Types > > CapacityLimit Object > CapacityLimit object > CapacityLimits Capability Object > > FCI capability > FCI.Capability > FCI.Capabilities > > limit-type > limit type > Limit Type > > Payload types > Payload Types > > Telemetry Capability object > Telemetry Capability Object > > Telemetry Source > telemetry source > Telemetry sources > Telemetry Source Type > telemetry source type > > Telemetry Source Metric Object > Telemetry Source Metric objects > > Telemetry Source Object > Telemetry Source object > > b) Should the payload types in the following titles be updated to > match the payload types listed in Table 3? > > Original: > 3.1.1. CDNI FCI Telemetry Payload Type > 3.1.2. CDNI FCI Capacity Limits Payload Type > > Perhaps: > 3.1.1. CDNI FCI.Telemetry Payload Type > 3.1.2. CDNI FCI.CapacityLimits Payload Type > --> > > > 8) <!--[rfced] FYI - We updated the following expansions to the form on > the right for consistency within this document and/or the RFC > Series. Please let us know of any objections. > > Content Delivery Networks Interconnection (CDNI) -> > Content Delivery Network Interconnection (CDNI) > > Footprints & Capabilities Advertisement Interface (FCI) -> > Footprint & Capabilities Advertisement interface (FCI) > > Time To Live (TTL) -> Time to Live (TTL) > --> > > > 9) <!-- [rfced] Please consider whether the "type" attribute of any sourcecode > element should be set. > > The current list of preferred values for "type" is available at > <https://www.rfc-editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=sourcecode-types>. > If the current list does not contain an applicable type, feel free to > suggest additions for consideration. 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