Hi Ben,

Thank you for your reply. We have marked your approval on the AUTH48 status 
page for this document (see https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9808).

We will await approvals from each of the parties listed at the AUTH48 status 
page prior to moving this document forward in the publication process.

Thank you,
RFC Editor/st

> On Jul 21, 2025, at 2:04 PM, Ben Rosenblum <b...@rosenblum.dev> wrote:
> 
> I approve the document. Thank you, Sarah!
> 
> Ben
> 
> On 7/21/2025 9:43 AM, Sarah Tarrant wrote:
>> Hi Andrew,
>> Thank you for your reply. We have marked your approval on the AUTH48 status 
>> page for this document (see https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9808).
>> We will await approvals from each of the parties listed at the AUTH48 status 
>> page prior to moving this document forward in the publication process.
>> Thank you,
>> RFC Editor/st
>>> On Jul 18, 2025, at 12:38 PM, and...@andrewnryan.com wrote:
>>> 
>>> Sarah,
>>>   Once again, thank you so much for working with us on this.  I have 
>>> reviewed the document and approve.
>>> 
>>> Andrew Ryan
>>> 
>>> On 7/18/2025 1:08 PM, Sarah Tarrant wrote:
>>>> Hi Andrew,
>>>> 
>>>> Thank you for your reply. We have updated the document accordingly and 
>>>> have no further questions.
>>>> 
>>>> Please review the document carefully to ensure satisfaction as we do not 
>>>> make changes once it has been published as an RFC. Contact us with any 
>>>> further updates or with your approval of the document in its current form. 
>>>> We will await approvals from each author prior to moving forward in the 
>>>> publication process.
>>>> 
>>>> The updated files have been posted here (please refresh):
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>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9808.pdf
>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9808.html
>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9808.xml
>>>> 
>>>> The relevant diff files have been posted here (please refresh):
>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9808-diff.html (comprehensive diff)
>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9808-auth48diff.html (AUTH48 changes 
>>>> only)
>>>> 
>>>> Note that it may be necessary for you to refresh your browser to view the 
>>>> most recent version.
>>>> 
>>>> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9808
>>>> 
>>>> Thank you,
>>>> RFC Editor/st
>>>> 
>>>>> On Jul 18, 2025, at 11:55 AM, and...@andrewnryan.com wrote:
>>>>> 
>>>>> Sarah,
>>>>>   I am glad that the format was easy.  Please see answers inline. Thank 
>>>>> you very much for your collaboration on this, it is greatly appreciated.
>>>>> 
>>>>> Andrew Ryan
>>>>> 
>>>>> On 7/18/2025 12:26 PM, Sarah Tarrant wrote:
>>>>>> Hi Andrew, Ben, and Nir,
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Andrew - Thank you for your reply and updated XML file. Sending an 
>>>>>> updated XML really speeds up the turnaround during AUTH48, especially 
>>>>>> with these more significant terminology updates.
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> We have a few followup questions/comments:
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> A) Regarding:
>>>>>>>> 6) <!-- [rfced] We note that the following reference entries are not
>>>>>>>> cited anywhere in the document. These entries will be removed
>>>>>>>> prior to publication, unless you would like to let us know where
>>>>>>>> they may be added in the text.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>   [OC-CII]   Ryan, A., Ed., Rosenblum, B., Goldstein, G., Roskin, R.,
>>>>>>>>              and G. Bichot, "Open Caching Capacity Insights -
>>>>>>>>              Functional Specification (Placeholder before
>>>>>>>>              publication)", <https://www.svta.org/document/open-
>>>>>>>>              caching-capacity-interface/>.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>   [OC-RR]    Finkelman, O., Ed., Hofmann, J., Klein, E., Mishra, S.,
>>>>>>>>              Ma, K., Sahar, D., and B. Zurat, "Open Caching Request
>>>>>>>>              Routing - Functional Specification", Version 1.1, 4
>>>>>>>>              October 2019, <https://www.svta.org/product/open-cache-
>>>>>>>>              request-routing-functional-specification/>.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>   [OCWG]     "Open Caching Home Page", <https://opencaching.svta.org/>.
>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>> AR: Perhaps we should reference these documents in the introduction, to 
>>>>>>> highlight that
>>>>>>> these are related.
>>>>>>> BR - I'm fine with removing the references
>>>>>> There appears to be conflicting guidance from Andrew and Ben for this. 
>>>>>> Please confer and let us know how we may update.
>>>>> Apologies for not clarifying/updating the PDF to reflect the outcome:  I 
>>>>> am AR in this sense, and I agree with BR (Ben) about removing the 
>>>>> non-cited references.
>>>>> 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> B) Regarding:
>>>>>>>> 10) <!-- [rfced] Please review whether any of the notes in this 
>>>>>>>> document
>>>>>>>> should be in the <aside> element. It is defined as "a container for
>>>>>>>> content that is semantically less important or tangential to the
>>>>>>>> content that surrounds it" 
>>>>>>>> (https://authors.ietf.org/en/rfcxml-vocabulary#aside).
>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>> AR: this suggestion is unclear to me
>>>>>> Apologies for the lack of clarity. We typically ask this when we see 
>>>>>> text led by "Note:" or "Note that", which would indent the text a bit.
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> For this document, we see "Note:" in Section 2. Would you like us to 
>>>>>> format with the aside element?
>>>>> Thank you for the clarification.  This seems like a good formatting 
>>>>> suggestion, can we please utilize the aside element for this Note?
>>>>> 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> The updated files have been posted here (please refresh):
>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9808.txt
>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9808.pdf
>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9808.html
>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9808.xml
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> The relevant diff files have been posted here (please refresh):
>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9808-diff.html (comprehensive diff)
>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9808-auth48diff.html (AUTH48 
>>>>>> changes only)
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Note that it may be necessary for you to refresh your browser to view 
>>>>>> the most recent version.
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9808
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Thank you,
>>>>>> RFC Editor/st
>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> On Jul 18, 2025, at 9:53 AM, and...@andrewnryan.com wrote:
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Greetings,
>>>>>>>   We reviewed the feedback you supplied and have 
>>>>>>> considered/incorporated them. Please find an XML document with changes 
>>>>>>> and approval, along with a PDF document which outlines the notes on the 
>>>>>>> feedback. Please let me know if this is acceptable and if there are any 
>>>>>>> additional things I can do to facilitate. Thank you
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Andrew Ryan
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> On 7/3/2025 9:51 AM, Sarah Tarrant wrote:
>>>>>>>> Hi Andrew,
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> I'll be on the lookout for your email!
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Thank you,
>>>>>>>> RFC Editor/st
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> On Jul 3, 2025, at 8:47 AM, Andrew Ryan <and...@andrewnryan.com> 
>>>>>>>>> wrote:
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> Sarah,
>>>>>>>>>   Thank you for the followup.  We are currently reviewing the 
>>>>>>>>> questions and should have feedback soon.  Thank you again.
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> Andrew Ryan
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> On Thu, Jul 3, 2025 at 9:17 AM Sarah Tarrant 
>>>>>>>>> <starr...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote:
>>>>>>>>> Authors,
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> This is a friendly reminder that we await answers to the questions 
>>>>>>>>> below and your review of the document before continuing with the 
>>>>>>>>> publication process.
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> Thank you,
>>>>>>>>> RFC Editor/st
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> On Jun 27, 2025, at 5:13 PM, rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org wrote:
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Authors,
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as 
>>>>>>>>>> necessary) the following questions, which are also in the XML file.
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> 1) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that appear 
>>>>>>>>>> in
>>>>>>>>>> the title) for use on https://www.rfc-editor.org/search. -->
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> 2) <!-- [rfced] Do the extensions define or does this specification 
>>>>>>>>>> define "a set
>>>>>>>>>> of additional Capability Objects..."?
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Current:
>>>>>>>>>>   The Content Delivery Network Interconnection (CDNI) Capacity
>>>>>>>>>>   Capability Advertisement Extensions define a set of additional
>>>>>>>>>>   Capability Objects that provide information about current 
>>>>>>>>>> downstream
>>>>>>>>>>   CDN (dCDN) utilization and specified usage limits to the delegating
>>>>>>>>>>   upstream CDN (uCDN) in order to inform traffic delegation 
>>>>>>>>>> decisions.
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>>>>>>>   This specification defines a set of additional
>>>>>>>>>>   Capability Objects that provide information about current 
>>>>>>>>>> downstream
>>>>>>>>>>   CDN (dCDN) utilization and specified usage limits to the delegating
>>>>>>>>>>   upstream CDN (uCDN) in order to inform traffic delegation 
>>>>>>>>>> decisions.
>>>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> 3) <!--[rfced] There are several lists for properties throughout the
>>>>>>>>>> document. If the "Type" and "Mandatory-to-Specify" fields only
>>>>>>>>>> contain one word and a period, may we remove the period? We note
>>>>>>>>>> that this document follows the formatting style in RFC 8008;
>>>>>>>>>> however, our current practice is to remove the punctuation if a
>>>>>>>>>> description only contains one word (see similar examples in RFCs
>>>>>>>>>> 9538 and 9677). Please let us know your preference.
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> One example
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Current:
>>>>>>>>>>   Property:  type
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>      Description:  A valid telemetry source type (see Section 
>>>>>>>>>> 2.1.1.1).
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>      Type:  String.
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>      Mandatory-to-Specify:  Yes.
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>>>>>>>   Property:  type
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>      Description:  A valid telemetry source type (see Section 
>>>>>>>>>> 2.1.1.1).
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>      Type:  String
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>      Mandatory-to-Specify:  Yes
>>>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> 4) <!--[rfced] For consistency, should "Telemetry Capability" be 
>>>>>>>>>> updated
>>>>>>>>>> as "the Telemetry Capability Object" in the following sentence?
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Original:
>>>>>>>>>>   The following shows an example of a Telemetry Capability
>>>>>>>>>>   including two metrics for a source, that is scoped to
>>>>>>>>>>   a footprint.
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>>>>>>>   The following shows an example of a Telemetry Capability Object,
>>>>>>>>>>   including two metrics for a source, that is scoped to
>>>>>>>>>>   a footprint.
>>>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> 5) <!--[rfced] We note that Table 1 includes a description of the
>>>>>>>>>> "generic" source type, whereas Table 4 and the IANA registry do
>>>>>>>>>> not. Should the description be added to Table 4 and the IANA
>>>>>>>>>> registry? In Section 2.1.1.1, should Table 1 be replaced with a
>>>>>>>>>> link to Table 4 to avoid duplication?
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Current (Section 2.1.1.1):
>>>>>>>>>>   At the time of this writing, the registry of valid Telemetry Source
>>>>>>>>>>   Object types is limited to a single type: Generic (see
>>>>>>>>>>   Section 3.2.1).
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Perhaps A:
>>>>>>>>>>   At the time of this writing, the registry of valid Telemetry Source
>>>>>>>>>>   Types is limited to a single type: generic (see Table 4 in Section 
>>>>>>>>>> 3.2.1).
>>>>>>>>>> or
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Perhaps B:
>>>>>>>>>>   At the time of this writing, the "CDNI Telemetry Source Types" 
>>>>>>>>>> registry
>>>>>>>>>>   is limited to a single type: generic (see Table 4 in Section 
>>>>>>>>>> 3.2.1).
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> ...
>>>>>>>>>> Current (Section 3.2):
>>>>>>>>>>   +=============+===========+
>>>>>>>>>>   | Source Type | Reference |
>>>>>>>>>>   +=============+===========+
>>>>>>>>>>   | generic     | RFC 9808  |
>>>>>>>>>>   +=============+===========+
>>>>>>>>>>   Table 4
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>>>>>>>   +=============+=======================================+===========+
>>>>>>>>>>   | Source Type | Description                           | Reference |
>>>>>>>>>>   +=============+=======================================+===========+
>>>>>>>>>>   | generic     | An object that allows for             | RFC 9808  |
>>>>>>>>>>   |             | advertisement of generic data sources |           |
>>>>>>>>>>   +=============+=======================================+===========+
>>>>>>>>>>   Table 4
>>>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> 6) <!-- [rfced] We note that the following reference entries are not
>>>>>>>>>> cited anywhere in the document. These entries will be removed
>>>>>>>>>> prior to publication, unless you would like to let us know where
>>>>>>>>>> they may be added in the text.
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>   [OC-CII]   Ryan, A., Ed., Rosenblum, B., Goldstein, G., Roskin, R.,
>>>>>>>>>>              and G. Bichot, "Open Caching Capacity Insights -
>>>>>>>>>>              Functional Specification (Placeholder before
>>>>>>>>>>              publication)", <https://www.svta.org/document/open-
>>>>>>>>>>              caching-capacity-interface/>.
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>   [OC-RR]    Finkelman, O., Ed., Hofmann, J., Klein, E., Mishra, S.,
>>>>>>>>>>              Ma, K., Sahar, D., and B. Zurat, "Open Caching Request
>>>>>>>>>>              Routing - Functional Specification", Version 1.1, 4
>>>>>>>>>>              October 2019, <https://www.svta.org/product/open-cache-
>>>>>>>>>>              request-routing-functional-specification/>.
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>   [OCWG]     "Open Caching Home Page", 
>>>>>>>>>> <https://opencaching.svta.org/>.
>>>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> 7) <!-- [rfced] Terminology
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> a) Throughout the text, the following terminology appears to be used
>>>>>>>>>> inconsistently. Please review these occurrences and let us know 
>>>>>>>>>> if/how they
>>>>>>>>>> may be made consistent.
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>   capability object type
>>>>>>>>>>   Capability Objects
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>   capacity limit-types
>>>>>>>>>>   Capacity Limits
>>>>>>>>>>   CDNI Capacity Limit Types
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>   CapacityLimit Object
>>>>>>>>>>   CapacityLimit object
>>>>>>>>>>   CapacityLimits Capability Object
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>   FCI capability
>>>>>>>>>>   FCI.Capability
>>>>>>>>>>   FCI.Capabilities
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>   limit-type
>>>>>>>>>>   limit type
>>>>>>>>>>   Limit Type
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>   Payload types
>>>>>>>>>>   Payload Types
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>   Telemetry Capability object
>>>>>>>>>>   Telemetry Capability Object
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>   Telemetry Source
>>>>>>>>>>   telemetry source
>>>>>>>>>>   Telemetry sources
>>>>>>>>>>   Telemetry Source Type
>>>>>>>>>>   telemetry source type
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>   Telemetry Source Metric Object
>>>>>>>>>>   Telemetry Source Metric objects
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>   Telemetry Source Object
>>>>>>>>>>   Telemetry Source object
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> b) Should the payload types in the following titles be updated to
>>>>>>>>>> match the payload types listed in Table 3?
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Original:
>>>>>>>>>>   3.1.1.  CDNI FCI Telemetry Payload Type
>>>>>>>>>>   3.1.2.  CDNI FCI Capacity Limits Payload Type
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>>>>>>>   3.1.1.  CDNI FCI.Telemetry Payload Type
>>>>>>>>>>   3.1.2.  CDNI FCI.CapacityLimits Payload Type
>>>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> 8) <!--[rfced] FYI - We updated the following expansions to the form 
>>>>>>>>>> on
>>>>>>>>>> the right for consistency within this document and/or the RFC
>>>>>>>>>> Series.  Please let us know of any objections.
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Content Delivery Networks Interconnection (CDNI) ->
>>>>>>>>>>    Content Delivery Network Interconnection (CDNI)
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Footprints & Capabilities Advertisement Interface (FCI) ->
>>>>>>>>>>    Footprint & Capabilities Advertisement interface (FCI)
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Time To Live (TTL) -> Time to Live (TTL)
>>>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> 9) <!-- [rfced] Please consider whether the "type" attribute of any 
>>>>>>>>>> sourcecode
>>>>>>>>>> element should be set.
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> The current list of preferred values for "type" is available at
>>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=sourcecode-types>.
>>>>>>>>>> If the current list does not contain an applicable type, feel free to
>>>>>>>>>> suggest additions for consideration. Note that it is also acceptable
>>>>>>>>>> to leave the "type" attribute not set.
>>>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> 10) <!-- [rfced] Please review whether any of the notes in this 
>>>>>>>>>> document
>>>>>>>>>> should be in the <aside> element. It is defined as "a container for
>>>>>>>>>> content that is semantically less important or tangential to the
>>>>>>>>>> content that surrounds it" 
>>>>>>>>>> (https://authors.ietf.org/en/rfcxml-vocabulary#aside).
>>>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> 11) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of 
>>>>>>>>>> the online
>>>>>>>>>> Style Guide 
>>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language>
>>>>>>>>>> and let us know if any changes are needed.  Updates of this nature 
>>>>>>>>>> typically
>>>>>>>>>> result in more precise language, which is helpful for readers.
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Note that our script did not flag any words in particular, but this 
>>>>>>>>>> should
>>>>>>>>>> still be reviewed as a best practice.
>>>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Thank you.
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> RFC Editor/st/kc
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> On Jun 27, 2025, at 3:12 PM, rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org wrote:
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> *****IMPORTANT*****
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Updated 2025/06/27
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> RFC Author(s):
>>>>>>>>>> --------------
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Instructions for Completing AUTH48
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>>>>>>>>>> Files
>>>>>>>>>> -----
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>>>>>>>>>> The files are available here:
>>>>>>>>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9808.xml
>>>>>>>>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9808.html
>>>>>>>>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9808.pdf
>>>>>>>>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9808.txt
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Diff file of the text:
>>>>>>>>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9808-diff.html
>>>>>>>>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9808-rfcdiff.html (side by 
>>>>>>>>>> side)
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Diff of the XML:
>>>>>>>>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9808-xmldiff1.html
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Tracking progress
>>>>>>>>>> -----------------
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> The details of the AUTH48 status of your document are here:
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>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Please let us know if you have any questions.
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Thank you for your cooperation,
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> RFC Editor
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> --------------------------------------
>>>>>>>>>> RFC9808 (draft-ietf-cdni-capacity-insights-extensions-12)
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Title            : CDNI Capacity Capability Advertisement Extensions
>>>>>>>>>> Author(s)        : A. Ryan, B. Rosenblum, N. Sopher
>>>>>>>>>> WG Chair(s)      : Kevin J. Ma, Sanjay Mishra
>>>>>>>>>> Area Director(s) : Gorry Fairhurst, Mike Bishop
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> <AUTH48_ RFC-to-be 9808 
>>>>>>> _draft-ietf-cdni-capacity-insights-extensions-12_ for your 
>>>>>>> revie.pdf><rfc9808.xml>
>>>> 
>>> 
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