Hi Andrew,

Thank you for your reply. We have marked your approval on the AUTH48 status 
page for this document (see https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9808).

We will await approvals from each of the parties listed at the AUTH48 status 
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Thank you,
RFC Editor/st

> On Jul 18, 2025, at 12:38 PM, and...@andrewnryan.com wrote:
> 
> Sarah,
>   Once again, thank you so much for working with us on this.  I have reviewed 
> the document and approve.
> 
> Andrew Ryan
> 
> On 7/18/2025 1:08 PM, Sarah Tarrant wrote:
>> Hi Andrew,
>> 
>> Thank you for your reply. We have updated the document accordingly and have 
>> no further questions.
>> 
>> Please review the document carefully to ensure satisfaction as we do not 
>> make changes once it has been published as an RFC. Contact us with any 
>> further updates or with your approval of the document in its current form. 
>> We will await approvals from each author prior to moving forward in the 
>> publication process.
>> 
>> The updated files have been posted here (please refresh):
>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9808.txt
>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9808.pdf
>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9808.html
>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9808.xml
>> 
>> The relevant diff files have been posted here (please refresh):
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>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9808-auth48diff.html (AUTH48 changes 
>> only)
>> 
>> Note that it may be necessary for you to refresh your browser to view the 
>> most recent version.
>> 
>> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9808
>> 
>> Thank you,
>> RFC Editor/st
>> 
>>> On Jul 18, 2025, at 11:55 AM, and...@andrewnryan.com wrote:
>>> 
>>> Sarah,
>>>   I am glad that the format was easy.  Please see answers inline. Thank you 
>>> very much for your collaboration on this, it is greatly appreciated.
>>> 
>>> Andrew Ryan
>>> 
>>> On 7/18/2025 12:26 PM, Sarah Tarrant wrote:
>>>> Hi Andrew, Ben, and Nir,
>>>> 
>>>> Andrew - Thank you for your reply and updated XML file. Sending an updated 
>>>> XML really speeds up the turnaround during AUTH48, especially with these 
>>>> more significant terminology updates.
>>>> 
>>>> We have a few followup questions/comments:
>>>> 
>>>> A) Regarding:
>>>>>> 6) <!-- [rfced] We note that the following reference entries are not
>>>>>> cited anywhere in the document. These entries will be removed
>>>>>> prior to publication, unless you would like to let us know where
>>>>>> they may be added in the text.
>>>>>> 
>>>>>>   [OC-CII]   Ryan, A., Ed., Rosenblum, B., Goldstein, G., Roskin, R.,
>>>>>>              and G. Bichot, "Open Caching Capacity Insights -
>>>>>>              Functional Specification (Placeholder before
>>>>>>              publication)", <https://www.svta.org/document/open-
>>>>>>              caching-capacity-interface/>.
>>>>>> 
>>>>>>   [OC-RR]    Finkelman, O., Ed., Hofmann, J., Klein, E., Mishra, S.,
>>>>>>              Ma, K., Sahar, D., and B. Zurat, "Open Caching Request
>>>>>>              Routing - Functional Specification", Version 1.1, 4
>>>>>>              October 2019, <https://www.svta.org/product/open-cache-
>>>>>>              request-routing-functional-specification/>.
>>>>>> 
>>>>>>   [OCWG]     "Open Caching Home Page", <https://opencaching.svta.org/>.
>>>>>> -->
>>>>> AR: Perhaps we should reference these documents in the introduction, to 
>>>>> highlight that
>>>>> these are related.
>>>>> BR - I'm fine with removing the references
>>>> There appears to be conflicting guidance from Andrew and Ben for this. 
>>>> Please confer and let us know how we may update.
>>> Apologies for not clarifying/updating the PDF to reflect the outcome:  I am 
>>> AR in this sense, and I agree with BR (Ben) about removing the non-cited 
>>> references.
>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> B) Regarding:
>>>>>> 10) <!-- [rfced] Please review whether any of the notes in this document
>>>>>> should be in the <aside> element. It is defined as "a container for
>>>>>> content that is semantically less important or tangential to the
>>>>>> content that surrounds it" 
>>>>>> (https://authors.ietf.org/en/rfcxml-vocabulary#aside).
>>>>>> -->
>>>>> AR: this suggestion is unclear to me
>>>> Apologies for the lack of clarity. We typically ask this when we see text 
>>>> led by "Note:" or "Note that", which would indent the text a bit.
>>>> 
>>>> For this document, we see "Note:" in Section 2. Would you like us to 
>>>> format with the aside element?
>>> Thank you for the clarification.  This seems like a good formatting 
>>> suggestion, can we please utilize the aside element for this Note?
>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> The updated files have been posted here (please refresh):
>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9808.txt
>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9808.pdf
>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9808.html
>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9808.xml
>>>> 
>>>> The relevant diff files have been posted here (please refresh):
>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9808-diff.html (comprehensive diff)
>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9808-auth48diff.html (AUTH48 changes 
>>>> only)
>>>> 
>>>> Note that it may be necessary for you to refresh your browser to view the 
>>>> most recent version.
>>>> 
>>>> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9808
>>>> 
>>>> Thank you,
>>>> RFC Editor/st
>>>> 
>>>>> On Jul 18, 2025, at 9:53 AM, and...@andrewnryan.com wrote:
>>>>> 
>>>>> Greetings,
>>>>>   We reviewed the feedback you supplied and have considered/incorporated 
>>>>> them. Please find an XML document with changes and approval, along with a 
>>>>> PDF document which outlines the notes on the feedback. Please let me know 
>>>>> if this is acceptable and if there are any additional things I can do to 
>>>>> facilitate. Thank you
>>>>> 
>>>>> Andrew Ryan
>>>>> 
>>>>> On 7/3/2025 9:51 AM, Sarah Tarrant wrote:
>>>>>> Hi Andrew,
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> I'll be on the lookout for your email!
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Thank you,
>>>>>> RFC Editor/st
>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> On Jul 3, 2025, at 8:47 AM, Andrew Ryan <and...@andrewnryan.com> wrote:
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Sarah,
>>>>>>>   Thank you for the followup.  We are currently reviewing the questions 
>>>>>>> and should have feedback soon.  Thank you again.
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Andrew Ryan
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> On Thu, Jul 3, 2025 at 9:17 AM Sarah Tarrant 
>>>>>>> <starr...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote:
>>>>>>> Authors,
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> This is a friendly reminder that we await answers to the questions 
>>>>>>> below and your review of the document before continuing with the 
>>>>>>> publication process.
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Thank you,
>>>>>>> RFC Editor/st
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> On Jun 27, 2025, at 5:13 PM, rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org wrote:
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Authors,
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as 
>>>>>>>> necessary) the following questions, which are also in the XML file.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 1) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that appear in
>>>>>>>> the title) for use on https://www.rfc-editor.org/search. -->
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 2) <!-- [rfced] Do the extensions define or does this specification 
>>>>>>>> define "a set
>>>>>>>> of additional Capability Objects..."?
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Current:
>>>>>>>>   The Content Delivery Network Interconnection (CDNI) Capacity
>>>>>>>>   Capability Advertisement Extensions define a set of additional
>>>>>>>>   Capability Objects that provide information about current downstream
>>>>>>>>   CDN (dCDN) utilization and specified usage limits to the delegating
>>>>>>>>   upstream CDN (uCDN) in order to inform traffic delegation decisions.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>>>>>   This specification defines a set of additional
>>>>>>>>   Capability Objects that provide information about current downstream
>>>>>>>>   CDN (dCDN) utilization and specified usage limits to the delegating
>>>>>>>>   upstream CDN (uCDN) in order to inform traffic delegation decisions.
>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 3) <!--[rfced] There are several lists for properties throughout the
>>>>>>>> document. If the "Type" and "Mandatory-to-Specify" fields only
>>>>>>>> contain one word and a period, may we remove the period? We note
>>>>>>>> that this document follows the formatting style in RFC 8008;
>>>>>>>> however, our current practice is to remove the punctuation if a
>>>>>>>> description only contains one word (see similar examples in RFCs
>>>>>>>> 9538 and 9677). Please let us know your preference.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> One example
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Current:
>>>>>>>>   Property:  type
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>      Description:  A valid telemetry source type (see Section 2.1.1.1).
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>      Type:  String.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>      Mandatory-to-Specify:  Yes.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>>>>>   Property:  type
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>      Description:  A valid telemetry source type (see Section 2.1.1.1).
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>      Type:  String
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>      Mandatory-to-Specify:  Yes
>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 4) <!--[rfced] For consistency, should "Telemetry Capability" be 
>>>>>>>> updated
>>>>>>>> as "the Telemetry Capability Object" in the following sentence?
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Original:
>>>>>>>>   The following shows an example of a Telemetry Capability
>>>>>>>>   including two metrics for a source, that is scoped to
>>>>>>>>   a footprint.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>>>>>   The following shows an example of a Telemetry Capability Object,
>>>>>>>>   including two metrics for a source, that is scoped to
>>>>>>>>   a footprint.
>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 5) <!--[rfced] We note that Table 1 includes a description of the
>>>>>>>> "generic" source type, whereas Table 4 and the IANA registry do
>>>>>>>> not. Should the description be added to Table 4 and the IANA
>>>>>>>> registry? In Section 2.1.1.1, should Table 1 be replaced with a
>>>>>>>> link to Table 4 to avoid duplication?
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Current (Section 2.1.1.1):
>>>>>>>>   At the time of this writing, the registry of valid Telemetry Source
>>>>>>>>   Object types is limited to a single type: Generic (see
>>>>>>>>   Section 3.2.1).
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Perhaps A:
>>>>>>>>   At the time of this writing, the registry of valid Telemetry Source
>>>>>>>>   Types is limited to a single type: generic (see Table 4 in Section 
>>>>>>>> 3.2.1).
>>>>>>>> or
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Perhaps B:
>>>>>>>>   At the time of this writing, the "CDNI Telemetry Source Types" 
>>>>>>>> registry
>>>>>>>>   is limited to a single type: generic (see Table 4 in Section 3.2.1).
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> ...
>>>>>>>> Current (Section 3.2):
>>>>>>>>   +=============+===========+
>>>>>>>>   | Source Type | Reference |
>>>>>>>>   +=============+===========+
>>>>>>>>   | generic     | RFC 9808  |
>>>>>>>>   +=============+===========+
>>>>>>>>   Table 4
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>>>>>   +=============+=======================================+===========+
>>>>>>>>   | Source Type | Description                           | Reference |
>>>>>>>>   +=============+=======================================+===========+
>>>>>>>>   | generic     | An object that allows for             | RFC 9808  |
>>>>>>>>   |             | advertisement of generic data sources |           |
>>>>>>>>   +=============+=======================================+===========+
>>>>>>>>   Table 4
>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 6) <!-- [rfced] We note that the following reference entries are not
>>>>>>>> cited anywhere in the document. These entries will be removed
>>>>>>>> prior to publication, unless you would like to let us know where
>>>>>>>> they may be added in the text.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>   [OC-CII]   Ryan, A., Ed., Rosenblum, B., Goldstein, G., Roskin, R.,
>>>>>>>>              and G. Bichot, "Open Caching Capacity Insights -
>>>>>>>>              Functional Specification (Placeholder before
>>>>>>>>              publication)", <https://www.svta.org/document/open-
>>>>>>>>              caching-capacity-interface/>.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>   [OC-RR]    Finkelman, O., Ed., Hofmann, J., Klein, E., Mishra, S.,
>>>>>>>>              Ma, K., Sahar, D., and B. Zurat, "Open Caching Request
>>>>>>>>              Routing - Functional Specification", Version 1.1, 4
>>>>>>>>              October 2019, <https://www.svta.org/product/open-cache-
>>>>>>>>              request-routing-functional-specification/>.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>   [OCWG]     "Open Caching Home Page", <https://opencaching.svta.org/>.
>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 7) <!-- [rfced] Terminology
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> a) Throughout the text, the following terminology appears to be used
>>>>>>>> inconsistently. Please review these occurrences and let us know if/how 
>>>>>>>> they
>>>>>>>> may be made consistent.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>   capability object type
>>>>>>>>   Capability Objects
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>   capacity limit-types
>>>>>>>>   Capacity Limits
>>>>>>>>   CDNI Capacity Limit Types
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>   CapacityLimit Object
>>>>>>>>   CapacityLimit object
>>>>>>>>   CapacityLimits Capability Object
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>   FCI capability
>>>>>>>>   FCI.Capability
>>>>>>>>   FCI.Capabilities
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>   limit-type
>>>>>>>>   limit type
>>>>>>>>   Limit Type
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>   Payload types
>>>>>>>>   Payload Types
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>   Telemetry Capability object
>>>>>>>>   Telemetry Capability Object
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>   Telemetry Source
>>>>>>>>   telemetry source
>>>>>>>>   Telemetry sources
>>>>>>>>   Telemetry Source Type
>>>>>>>>   telemetry source type
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>   Telemetry Source Metric Object
>>>>>>>>   Telemetry Source Metric objects
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>   Telemetry Source Object
>>>>>>>>   Telemetry Source object
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> b) Should the payload types in the following titles be updated to
>>>>>>>> match the payload types listed in Table 3?
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Original:
>>>>>>>>   3.1.1.  CDNI FCI Telemetry Payload Type
>>>>>>>>   3.1.2.  CDNI FCI Capacity Limits Payload Type
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>>>>>   3.1.1.  CDNI FCI.Telemetry Payload Type
>>>>>>>>   3.1.2.  CDNI FCI.CapacityLimits Payload Type
>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 8) <!--[rfced] FYI - We updated the following expansions to the form on
>>>>>>>> the right for consistency within this document and/or the RFC
>>>>>>>> Series.  Please let us know of any objections.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Content Delivery Networks Interconnection (CDNI) ->
>>>>>>>>    Content Delivery Network Interconnection (CDNI)
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Footprints & Capabilities Advertisement Interface (FCI) ->
>>>>>>>>    Footprint & Capabilities Advertisement interface (FCI)
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Time To Live (TTL) -> Time to Live (TTL)
>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 9) <!-- [rfced] Please consider whether the "type" attribute of any 
>>>>>>>> sourcecode
>>>>>>>> element should be set.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> The current list of preferred values for "type" is available at
>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=sourcecode-types>.
>>>>>>>> If the current list does not contain an applicable type, feel free to
>>>>>>>> suggest additions for consideration. Note that it is also acceptable
>>>>>>>> to leave the "type" attribute not set.
>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 10) <!-- [rfced] Please review whether any of the notes in this 
>>>>>>>> document
>>>>>>>> should be in the <aside> element. It is defined as "a container for
>>>>>>>> content that is semantically less important or tangential to the
>>>>>>>> content that surrounds it" 
>>>>>>>> (https://authors.ietf.org/en/rfcxml-vocabulary#aside).
>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 11) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of the 
>>>>>>>> online
>>>>>>>> Style Guide 
>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language>
>>>>>>>> and let us know if any changes are needed.  Updates of this nature 
>>>>>>>> typically
>>>>>>>> result in more precise language, which is helpful for readers.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Note that our script did not flag any words in particular, but this 
>>>>>>>> should
>>>>>>>> still be reviewed as a best practice.
>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Thank you.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> RFC Editor/st/kc
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> On Jun 27, 2025, at 3:12 PM, rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org wrote:
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> *****IMPORTANT*****
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Updated 2025/06/27
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> RFC Author(s):
>>>>>>>> --------------
>>>>>>>> 
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>>>>>>>> RFC Editor
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> --------------------------------------
>>>>>>>> RFC9808 (draft-ietf-cdni-capacity-insights-extensions-12)
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Title            : CDNI Capacity Capability Advertisement Extensions
>>>>>>>> Author(s)        : A. Ryan, B. Rosenblum, N. Sopher
>>>>>>>> WG Chair(s)      : Kevin J. Ma, Sanjay Mishra
>>>>>>>> Area Director(s) : Gorry Fairhurst, Mike Bishop
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>> <AUTH48_ RFC-to-be 9808 _draft-ietf-cdni-capacity-insights-extensions-12_ 
>>>>> for your revie.pdf><rfc9808.xml>
>> 
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