Megan,

Thank you so much for this!

I reviewed the changes, and approve publication.

Thanks,


Carlos Pignataro (He/Him)

Founder and Principal
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From: Megan Ferguson <[email protected]>
Date: Friday, October 24, 2025 at 5:10 PM
To: [email protected] <[email protected]>
Cc: RFC Editor <[email protected]>, [email protected] 
<[email protected]>, [email protected] 
<[email protected]>, [email protected] <[email protected]>, Carlos 
Pignataro <[email protected]>, [email protected] <[email protected]>, 
[email protected] <[email protected]>, [email protected] <[email protected]>, 
James Guichard <[email protected]>, [email protected] 
<[email protected]>
Subject: Re: [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9884 
<draft-ietf-mpls-spring-lsp-ping-path-sid-13> for your review

Thanks, Xiao Min!

We have folded in these changes as requested.

As a few updates requested in AUTH48 have now affected the following terms, we 
would like to request a re-review to ensure/confirm they appear as desired 
throughout (e.g., perhaps they should be lowercase everywhere except in the 
sub-TLV or TLV names?).

> a) We see mixed use of the following forms.  Please let us know if/how these 
> should be made consistent.
>
> SR path vs. SR Path
> segment-list vs. Segment List vs. segment list
> candidate path vs. Candidate Path vs. Candidate path

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Thank you.

Megan Ferguson
RFC Production Center

> On Oct 23, 2025, at 8:23 PM, [email protected] wrote:
>
> Hi Megan,
>
> Thank you for the update. Your new text looks good to me.
> Following the text change, I propose two more editorial changes as below.
> OLD:
> When a PSID is used to identify a Segment List, the Target FEC
>
> NEW:
> When a PSID is used to identify a single segment list, the Target FEC
>
> OLD:
> When a PSID is used to identify some segment lists in a Candidate path or an 
> SR policy, the Target FEC
>
> NEW:
> When a PSID is used to identify some segment lists in a candidate path or an 
> SR policy, the Target FEC
>
> Cheers,
> Xiao Min
> Original
> From: MeganFerguson <[email protected]>
> To: 肖敏10093570;
> Cc: RFC Editor 
> <[email protected]>;彭少富10053815;[email protected] 
> <[email protected]>;[email protected] 
> <[email protected]>;[email protected] 
> <[email protected]>;[email protected] 
> <[email protected]>;[email protected] 
> <[email protected]>;[email protected] <[email protected]>;James Guichard 
> <[email protected]>;[email protected] 
> <[email protected]>;
> Date:  2025年10月24日 00:59
> Subject: Re: [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9884 
> <draft-ietf-mpls-spring-lsp-ping-path-sid-13> for your review
> Hi Xiao Min,
>
> Your list was really helpful in explaining your intent — thank you!  Perhaps 
> using something similar in the text would be most clear to readers?  What do 
> you think about using the following?
>
> Original:
>    As specified in Section 2 of [RFC9545], a PSID is used to identify a
>    segment list, some or all segment lists in a Candidate path or an SR
>    policy, so six different Target FEC Stack sub-TLVs need to be defined
>    for PSID.
>
> Current:
>
>    As specified in Section 2 of [RFC9545], a PSID is used to identify
>    the following:
>
>    *  a single segment list, some segment lists, or all segment lists in
>       a candidate path of an SR policy,
>
>    *  some segment lists across multiple candidate paths of an SR
>       policy, or
>
>    *  all segment lists in all candidate paths of an SR policy.
>
>    Therefore, six different Target FEC Stack sub-TLVs need to be defined
>    for PSID.
>
> If you’d prefer something else, please let us know.  We’ve included the above 
> in the files posted.  Please review the files carefully as we do not make 
> changes after publication.
>
> The files have been posted here (please refresh):
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>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9884.xml
>
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> by side)
>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9884-auth48diff.html (AUTH48 changes 
> only)
>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9884-auth48rfcdiff.html (AUTH48 side 
> by side)
>
> The AUTH48 status page for this document is available here:
>
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9884
>
> Thank you.
>
> Megan Ferguson
> RFC Production Center
>
> > On Oct 22, 2025, at 8:01 PM, [email protected] wrote:
> >
> > Hi Megan,
> >
> > Thank you for the prompt response.
> > Please see inline.
> > Original
> > From: MeganFerguson <[email protected]>
> > To: 肖敏10093570;
> > Cc: RFC Editor 
> > <[email protected]>;彭少富10053815;[email protected] 
> > <[email protected]>;[email protected] 
> > <[email protected]>;[email protected] 
> > <[email protected]>;[email protected] 
> > <[email protected]>;[email protected] 
> > <[email protected]>;[email protected] 
> > <[email protected]>;[email protected] 
> > <[email protected]>;[email protected] 
> > <[email protected]>;
> > Date:  2025年10月23日 09:24
> > Subject: Re: [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9884 
> > <draft-ietf-mpls-spring-lsp-ping-path-sid-13> for your review
> > Xiao Min,
> >
> > Thanks for pointing this out.
> >
> > We have incorporated this change into the existing files.  Please note that 
> > we added a further comma to the original to make a list of three (i.e., a 
> > PSID identifies 1) a segment list, 2) some or all segment lists in a 
> > Candidate path, or 3) an SR policy).  Please confirm that this is your 
> > intended meaning.  Please also confirm that Candidate path (and not 
> > Candidate Path) is correct here.
> > [XM]>>> If the original text is deemed not clear enough, then I propose to 
> > change the text as below.
> > OLD:
> > a PSID is used to identify a segment list, some or all segment lists in a 
> > Candidate path or an SR policy,
> > NEW:
> > a PSID is used to identify a segment list, some segment lists, or all 
> > segment lists, in a candidate path or an SR policy,
> > The intended meaning is to cover a list of five as follows:
> > * a segment list in a candidate path of an SR policy
> > * some segment lists in a candidate path of an SR policy
> > * all segment lists in a candidate path of an SR policy
> > * some segment lists across multiple candidate paths of an SR policy
> > * all segment lists in all candidate paths of an SR policy
> > Also note that in the NEW text "candidate path" is used to substitute 
> > "Candidate path".
> >
> > Cheers,
> > Xiao Min
> >
> > Please review the files carefully as we do not make changes after 
> > publication.
> >
> > The files have been posted here (please refresh):
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> >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9884.xml
> >
> > The relevant diff files have been posted here (please refresh):
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> > side by side)
> >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9884-auth48diff.html (AUTH48 
> > changes only)
> >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9884-auth48rfcdiff.html (AUTH48 
> > side by side)
> >
> > The AUTH48 status page for this document is available here:
> >
> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9884
> >
> > Thank you.
> >
> > Megan Ferguson
> > RFC Production Center
> >
> > > On Oct 21, 2025, at 9:43 PM, [email protected] wrote:
> > >
> > > Hi Megan,
> > >
> > > Thank you for the update.
> > > Just one point I might be not clear enough in my response. Copy it here.
> > > > 5) <!--[rfced] Please review our following update and let us know any
> > > >      objections.
> > > >
> > > > Original:
> > > > As specified in Section 2 of [RFC9545], a PSID is used to identify a
> > > > segment list, some or all segment lists in a Candidate path or an SR
> > > > policy, so six different Target FEC Stack sub-TLVs need to be defined
> > > > for PSID.
> > > >
> > > > Current:
> > > > As specified in Section 2 of [RFC9545], a PSID is used to identify a
> > > > segment list and/or some or all segment lists in a Candidate path or an 
> > > > SR
> > > > policy, so six different Target FEC Stack sub-TLVs need to be defined
> > > > for PSID.
> > > > -->
> > > > [XM]>>> Here "a segment list" is also in a Candidate path or an SR 
> > > > policy, so "and/or" seems inappropriate.
> > > My thought was that I prefer to remain the original text as is.
> > >
> > > Cheers,
> > > Xiao Min
> > > Original
> > > From: MeganFerguson <[email protected]>
> > > To: 肖敏10093570;
> > > Cc: RFC Editor 
> > > <[email protected]>;彭少富10053815;[email protected] 
> > > <[email protected]>;[email protected] 
> > > <[email protected]>;[email protected] 
> > > <[email protected]>;[email protected] 
> > > <[email protected]>;[email protected] 
> > > <[email protected]>;[email protected] 
> > > <[email protected]>;[email protected] 
> > > <[email protected]>;[email protected] 
> > > <[email protected]>;
> > > Date:  2025年10月22日 09:44
> > > Subject: Re: [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9884 
> > > <draft-ietf-mpls-spring-lsp-ping-path-sid-13> for your review
> > > Hi Xiao Min,
> > >
> > > Thank you for your guidance and careful review.  (Thanks to James, 
> > > Adrian, and Carlos for your replies as well!)
> > >
> > > We have updated accordingly.
> > >
> > > Please review the files carefully as we do not make changes after 
> > > publication.
> > >
> > > The files have been posted here (please refresh):
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> > >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9884.pdf
> > >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9884.html
> > >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9884.xml
> > >
> > > The relevant diff files have been posted here (please refresh):
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> > > side by side)
> > >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9884-auth48diff.html (AUTH48 
> > > changes only)
> > >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9884-auth48rfcdiff.html (AUTH48 
> > > side by side)
> > >
> > > Please contact us with any further updates/questions/comments you may 
> > > have.
> > >
> > > We will await approvals from each of the parties listed on the AUTH48 
> > > status page prior to moving forward to publication.
> > >
> > > The AUTH48 status page for this document is available here:
> > >
> > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9884
> > >
> > > Thank you.
> > >
> > > RFC Editor/mf
> > >
> > > > On Oct 21, 2025, at 5:35 AM, [email protected] wrote:
> > > >
> > > > Hi Megan,
> > > >
> > > > Many thanks for your efforts.
> > > > Please see inline.
> > > > Original
> > > > From: [email protected] <[email protected]>
> > > > To: 肖敏10093570;彭少富10053815;[email protected] 
> > > > <[email protected]>;[email protected] 
> > > > <[email protected]>;[email protected] 
> > > > <[email protected]>;
> > > > Cc: [email protected] 
> > > > <[email protected]>;[email protected] 
> > > > <[email protected]>;[email protected] 
> > > > <[email protected]>;[email protected] 
> > > > <[email protected]>;[email protected] 
> > > > <[email protected]>;[email protected] 
> > > > <[email protected]>;
> > > > Date:  2025年10月21日 11:20
> > > > Subject: Re: [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9884 
> > > > <draft-ietf-mpls-spring-lsp-ping-path-sid-13> for your review
> > > > Authors and *AD,
> > > >
> > > > While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as 
> > > > necessary) the following questions, which are also in the source file.
> > > >
> > > > 1) <!--[rfced] Please note that we have updated the title as follows (to
> > > >      include articles).
> > > >
> > > > Original Document Title:
> > > > Label Switched Path Ping for Segment Routing Path Segment Identifier
> > > > with MPLS Data Plane
> > > >
> > > > Current:
> > > > A Label Switched Path Ping for the Segment Routing Path Segment 
> > > > Identifier
> > > > with an MPLS Data Plane
> > > > -->
> > > > [XM]>>> I prefer to remain the original document title as is, because 
> > > > we already have RFCs as below.
> > > > RFC 8287: Label Switched Path (LSP) Ping/Traceroute for Segment Routing 
> > > > (SR) IGP-Prefix and IGP-Adjacency Segment Identifiers (SIDs) with MPLS 
> > > > Data Planes
> > > > RFC 9703: Label Switched Path (LSP) Ping/Traceroute for Segment Routing 
> > > > (SR) Egress Peer Engineering (EPE) Segment Identifiers (SIDs) with MPLS 
> > > > Data Plane
> > > >
> > > > 2) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that appear in
> > > > the title) for use on https://www.rfc-editor.org/search. -->
> > > > [XM]>>> Target FEC Stack, PSID.
> > > >
> > > > 3) <!--[rfced] Please review the use of the two citations in the 
> > > > sentence
> > > >      below.  RFC 8029 is "Detecting Multiprotocol Label Switched
> > > >      (MPLS) Data-Plane Failures" while RFC 8287 is "Label Switched
> > > >      Path (LSP) Ping/Traceroute for Segment Routing (SR) IGP-Prefix
> > > >      and IGP-Adjacency Segment Identifiers (SIDs) with MPLS Data
> > > >      Planes".
> > > >
> > > > Original:
> > > >    Procedure for LSP Ping [RFC8029] as defined in Section 7.4 of
> > > >    [RFC8287] is also applicable to PSID, and this document appends
> > > >    existing step 4a with a new step 4b specific to PSID.
> > > > -->
> > > > [XM]>>> That's fine. RFC 8029 is the base spec for LSP Ping, which is 
> > > > extended by both RFC 8287 and this document for SR scenarios.
> > > >
> > > > 4) <!--[rfced] *ADs - Please confirm that no "Updates" relationship to
> > > >      RFC 8287 should be indicated in the header/Abstract/metadata of the
> > > >      document with the following text (and all of Section 4.1) in
> > > >      mind:
> > > >
> > > > Original:
> > > >    Procedure for LSP Ping [RFC8029] as defined in Section 7.4 of
> > > >    [RFC8287] is also applicable to PSID, and this document appends
> > > >    existing step 4a with a new step 4b specific to PSID.
> > > > -->
> > > >
> > > >
> > > > 5) <!--[rfced] Please review our following update and let us know any
> > > >      objections.
> > > >
> > > > Original:
> > > > As specified in Section 2 of [RFC9545], a PSID is used to identify a
> > > > segment list, some or all segment lists in a Candidate path or an SR
> > > > policy, so six different Target FEC Stack sub-TLVs need to be defined
> > > > for PSID.
> > > >
> > > > Current:
> > > > As specified in Section 2 of [RFC9545], a PSID is used to identify a
> > > > segment list and/or some or all segment lists in a Candidate path or an 
> > > > SR
> > > > policy, so six different Target FEC Stack sub-TLVs need to be defined
> > > > for PSID.
> > > > -->
> > > > [XM]>>> Here "a segment list" is also in a Candidate path or an SR 
> > > > policy, so "and/or" seems inappropriate.
> > > >
> > > > 6) <!--[rfced] Please review the following uses of "PSID FEC Stack
> > > >      sub-TLV" and "malformed FEC Stack sub-TLV".  Other uses of "FEC
> > > >      Stack sub-TLV" begin with "Target".
> > > >
> > > > Original:
> > > > ....validity checks on the content of the PSID FEC Stack sub-TLV.
> > > >
> > > > and
> > > >
> > > > If a malformed FEC Stack sub-TLV is received...
> > > >
> > > > Perhaps:
> > > > ....validity checks on the content of the PSID Target FEC Stack sub-TLV.
> > > >
> > > > and
> > > >
> > > > If a malformed Target FEC Stack sub-TLV is received...
> > > > [XM]>>> OK.
> > > > -->
> > > >
> > > >
> > > > 7) <!--[rfced] Please confirm that the following are the general 
> > > > concepts
> > > >      and not field names (note that these are examples, more instances
> > > >      occur):
> > > >
> > > > Original:
> > > >          *  Validate that the signaled or provisioned headend, color,
> > > >             and endpoint, for the PSID, matches with the corresponding
> > > >             fields in the received SR Policy Associated PSID - IPv4 sub-
> > > >             TLV.
> > > >
> > > > Perhaps:
> > > >          *  Validate that the signaled or provisioned Headend, Color,
> > > >             and Endpoint fields for the PSID match with the 
> > > > corresponding
> > > >             fields in the received SR Policy Associated PSID - IPv4 
> > > > sub-TLV.
> > > >
> > > >
> > > > Original:
> > > >          *  Validate that the signaled or provisioned headend, color,
> > > >             endpoint, originator, and discriminator, for the PSID,
> > > >             matches with the corresponding fields in the received SR
> > > >             Candidate Path Associated PSID - IPv4 sub-TLV.
> > > >
> > > > Perhaps:
> > > >          *  Validate that the signaled or provisioned Headend, Color,
> > > >             Endpoint, Originator, and Discriminator fields for the PSID
> > > >             match with the corresponding fields in the received SR
> > > >             Candidate Path Associated PSID - IPv4 sub-TLV.
> > > > [XM]>>> They are the general concepts and not field names, so no 
> > > > changes needed.
> > > > -->
> > > >
> > > >
> > > > 8) <!--[rfced] Please note that we have updated the reference to
> > > >      draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-sr-policy-17 to point to the RFC-to-be: as
> > > >      this I-D is currently in AUTH48 (with nearly all approvals
> > > >      complete), we assume it will move to publication prior to the
> > > >      publication of this document.
> > > >
> > > > Please let us know how you would like to proceed if RFC-to-be 9857 is
> > > > not published before this document (i.e., return to the I-D form of
> > > > the reference or wait for the publication of 9857).  -->
> > > > [XM]>>> Return to the I-D form of the reference.
> > > >
> > > > 9) <!--[rfced] We had the following questions/comments related to
> > > >      abbreviation use throughout the document:
> > > >
> > > > a) Please note that abbreviations have been expanded upon first use.  
> > > > Please review and confirm all expansions inserted appear as desired.
> > > > [XM]>>> OK.
> > > > b) Please note that we will update to use the following abbreviations, 
> > > > instead of their expanded forms, after the first use in accordance with 
> > > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#exp_abbrev:
> > > > SR
> > > > PSID
> > > > [XM]>>> OK.
> > > > -->
> > > >
> > > >
> > > > 10) <!--[rfced] We had the following questions related to terminology 
> > > > used throughout the document:
> > > >
> > > > a) We see mixed use of the following forms.  Please let us know if/how 
> > > > these should be made consistent.
> > > >
> > > > SR path vs. SR Path
> > > > segment-list vs. Segment List vs. segment list
> > > > candidate path vs. Candidate Path vs. Candidate path
> > > > [XM]>>> In my opinion it's not necessary to make them consistent, 
> > > > because the contexts are different.
> > > >
> > > > b) Is Return Subcode <RSC> the same as "return code"?  Please review
> > > > and advise if these should be made uniform.
> > > > [XM]>>> No, they're different. Both of them are defined in RFC 8029.
> > > > -->
> > > >
> > > >
> > > > 11) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of the
> > > >      online Style Guide
> > > >      <https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language>
> > > >      and let us know if any changes are needed.  Updates of this
> > > >      nature typically result in more precise language, which is
> > > >      helpful for readers.
> > > >
> > > > Note that our script did not flag any words in particular, but this
> > > > should still be reviewed as a best practice.
> > > > -->
> > > > [XM]>>> No issues found.
> > > >
> > > > [XM]>>> I propose five editorial changes as below.
> > > >
> > > > Section #2.2
> > > >
> > > > OLD:
> > > > (Section 5.2 of [PCE-MULTIPATH])
> > > >
> > > > NEW:
> > > > (Section 4.2 of [PCE-MULTIPATH])
> > > >
> > > > Section #3.4
> > > >
> > > > OLD:
> > > > as an SR Policy Associated PSID - IPv6 Sub-TLV
> > > >
> > > > NEW:
> > > > as an SR Policy Associated PSID - IPv6 sub-TLV
> > > >
> > > > Section #4
> > > >
> > > > OLD:
> > > > receive an echo request and sends an echo reply
> > > >
> > > > NEW:
> > > > receive an echo request and send an echo reply
> > > >
> > > > Section #4.1
> > > >
> > > > OLD:
> > > > (the notation <RSC> refers to the Return Subcode)
> > > >
> > > > COMMENT:
> > > > the same text appears twice, please delete the second one
> > > >
> > > > Section #4.1
> > > >
> > > > OLD:
> > > > and segment-list-id, for the PSID
> > > >
> > > > NEW:
> > > > and segment-list-id for the PSID
> > > >
> > > > Cheers,
> > > > Xiao Min
> > > >
> > > >
> > > > Thank you.
> > > >
> > > > Megan Ferguson
> > > > RFC Production Center
> > > >
> > > > *****IMPORTANT*****
> > > >
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> > > >
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> > > > --------------------------------------
> > > > RFC9884 (draft-ietf-mpls-spring-lsp-ping-path-sid-13)
> > > >
> > > > Title            : Label Switched Path Ping for Segment Routing Path 
> > > > Segment Identifier with MPLS Data Plane
> > > > Author(s)        : X. Min, S. Peng, L. Gong, R. Gandhi, C. Pignataro
> > > > WG Chair(s)      : Tarek Saad, Tony Li, Adrian Farrel
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