I have read the 9915 top to bottom. I think the phrasing at 18.2.12: > A client not detected as having moved to a new link SHOULD initiate
is still pretty awkward. The new phrasing, seems to suggest that an external entity is going to detect the client has moved. But, it's the client has to do the detection. I think the problem is that the sentences are too long/too few. I can live with this, but maybe someone else has a suggestion here. ---- non-issues: A question about the many minor changes where a list item has a : added. The colon appears in the <dt> as text, it's not produced by xml2rfc. Someone did s,</dt>,:</dt>,g right? So that seems like a stylistic thing that (authors) should just be more aware of. It seems like it aught to be something xml2rfc "enforces" I'm also curious about the how/why IA_PD-options got hyphen wrapped (section 21.22), but in our text it was just moved to a new line. Glad we did 3.Background this way! -- Michael Richardson <[email protected]> . o O ( IPv6 IøT consulting ) Sandelman Software Works Inc, Ottawa and Worldwide
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