Hi,

These change is complete:

https://www.iana.org/assignments/dlep-parameters

thanks,
Amanda

On Mon Dec 22 17:10:57 2025, [email protected] wrote:
> Dear IANA,
> 
> We have all author approvals for this document.
> 
> Please make the following update on
> <https://www.iana.org/assignments/dlep-parameters/>, in the "Extension
> Type Values" registry:
> 
> OLD: DiffServ Aware Credit Window
> 
> NEW: Diffserv Aware Credit Window
> 
> Thank you!
> 
> Lynne Bartholomew
> RFC Production Center
> 
> > On Dec 22, 2025, at 8:57 AM, Lynne Bartholomew
> > <[email protected]> wrote:
> >
> > Hi, Bow-Nan.
> >
> > No worries.  We have noted your approval on the AUTH48 status page:
> >
> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9894
> >
> > Thank you!
> >
> > Lynne Bartholomew
> > RFC Production Center
> >
> >> On Dec 18, 2025, at 6:12 PM, Cheng, Bow-Nan - 0662 - MITLL
> >> <[email protected]> wrote:
> >>
> >> I'm fine with this -- apologies for the delay
> >>
> >> On 12/15/25, 1:52 PM, "Lynne Bartholomew" <[email protected]
> >> editor.org <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:
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> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894.txt <https://www.rfc-
> >> editor.org/authors/rfc9894.txt>
> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894.pdf <https://www.rfc-
> >> editor.org/authors/rfc9894.pdf>
> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894.html <https://www.rfc-
> >> editor.org/authors/rfc9894.html>
> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894.xml <https://www.rfc-
> >> editor.org/authors/rfc9894.xml>
> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-diff.html
> >> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-diff.html>
> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-rfcdiff.html
> >> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-rfcdiff.html> (side by
> >> side)
> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-auth48diff.html
> >> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-auth48diff.html>
> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-auth48rfcdiff.html
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> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-lastdiff.html
> >> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-lastdiff.html>
> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-lastrfcdiff.html
> >> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-lastrfcdiff.html> (side
> >> by side)
> >>
> >>
> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-xmldiff1.html
> >> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-xmldiff1.html>
> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-xmldiff2.html
> >> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-xmldiff2.html>
> >>
> >>
> >> The AUTH48 status page is here:
> >>
> >>
> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9894 <https://www.rfc-
> >> editor.org/auth48/rfc9894>
> >>
> >>
> >> Thank you!
> >>
> >>
> >> Lynne Bartholomew
> >> RFC Production Center
> >>
> >>
> >>> On Dec 8, 2025, at 10:33 AM, Lynne Bartholomew
> >>> <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]
> >>> editor.org>> wrote:
> >>>
> >>> Dear Bow-Nan,
> >>>
> >>> Checking in with you regarding the status of this document. Please
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> >>> document for publication in its current form.
> >>>
> >>> The latest files are posted here. Please refresh your browser:
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> >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894.txt <https://www.rfc-
> >>> editor.org/authors/rfc9894.txt>
> >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894.pdf <https://www.rfc-
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> >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894.html <https://www.rfc-
> >>> editor.org/authors/rfc9894.html>
> >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894.xml <https://www.rfc-
> >>> editor.org/authors/rfc9894.xml>
> >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-diff.html
> >>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-diff.html>
> >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-rfcdiff.html
> >>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-rfcdiff.html> (side by
> >>> side)
> >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-auth48diff.html
> >>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-auth48diff.html>
> >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-auth48rfcdiff.html
> >>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-auth48rfcdiff.html>
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> >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-lastdiff.html
> >>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-lastdiff.html>
> >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-lastrfcdiff.html
> >>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-lastrfcdiff.html> (side
> >>> by side)
> >>>
> >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-xmldiff1.html
> >>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-xmldiff1.html>
> >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-xmldiff2.html
> >>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-xmldiff2.html>
> >>>
> >>> The AUTH48 status page is here:
> >>>
> >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9894 <https://www.rfc-
> >>> editor.org/auth48/rfc9894>
> >>>
> >>> Thank you!
> >>>
> >>> Lynne Bartholomew
> >>> RFC Production Center
> >>>
> >>>> On Dec 4, 2025, at 8:36 AM, Lynne Bartholomew
> >>>> <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]
> >>>> editor.org>> wrote:
> >>>>
> >>>> Hi, Donald. Thank you for the quick reply! We have updated
> >>>> accordingly.
> >>>>
> >>>> The latest files are posted here. Please refresh your browser:
> >>>>
> >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894.txt <https://www.rfc-
> >>>> editor.org/authors/rfc9894.txt>
> >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894.pdf <https://www.rfc-
> >>>> editor.org/authors/rfc9894.pdf>
> >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894.html <https://www.rfc-
> >>>> editor.org/authors/rfc9894.html>
> >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894.xml <https://www.rfc-
> >>>> editor.org/authors/rfc9894.xml>
> >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-diff.html
> >>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-diff.html>
> >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-rfcdiff.html
> >>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-rfcdiff.html> (side by
> >>>> side)
> >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-auth48diff.html
> >>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-auth48diff.html>
> >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-auth48rfcdiff.html
> >>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-auth48rfcdiff.html>
> >>>> (side by side)
> >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-lastdiff.html
> >>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-lastdiff.html>
> >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-lastrfcdiff.html
> >>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-lastrfcdiff.html>
> >>>> (side by side)
> >>>>
> >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-xmldiff1.html
> >>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-xmldiff1.html>
> >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-xmldiff2.html
> >>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-xmldiff2.html>
> >>>>
> >>>> Thanks again!
> >>>>
> >>>> Lynne Bartholomew
> >>>> RFC Production Center
> >>>>
> >>>>> On Dec 3, 2025, at 9:52 AM, Donald Eastlake <[email protected]
> >>>>> <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:
> >>>>>
> >>>>> On Wed, Dec 3, 2025 at 11:48 AM Lynne Bartholomew
> >>>>> <[email protected]
> >>>>> <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> Dear authors,
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> The authors of companion document RFC-to-be 9893 have changed
> >>>>>> 'logical "Credit Window(s)"' to 'logical "credit window(s)"',
> >>>>>> because they went with lowercase "credit window(s)" where this
> >>>>>> term is used generally.
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> For consistency within this group of DLEP documents, may we
> >>>>>> change 'logical "Credit Windows"' to 'logical "credit windows"'
> >>>>>> in this document as well?
> >>>>>
> >>>>> I am OK with changing to lowercase.
> >>>>>
> >>>>> Thanks,
> >>>>> Donald
> >>>>> ===============================
> >>>>> Donald E. Eastlake 3rd +1-508-333-2270 (cell)
> >>>>> 2386 Panoramic Circle, Apopka, FL 32703 USA
> >>>>> [email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>
> >>>>>
> >>>>>> Currently:
> >>>>>> ... Flow control is provided using one or more logical "Credit
> >>>>>> Windows",
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> Thank you!
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> Lynne Bartholomew
> >>>>>> RFC Production Center
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>>> On Nov 26, 2025, at 12:52 PM, Lynne Bartholomew
> >>>>>>> <[email protected]
> >>>>>>> <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> Hi, Lou.
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> We have noted your approval on the AUTH48 status page:
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9894 <https://www.rfc-
> >>>>>>> editor.org/auth48/rfc9894>
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> Thank you very much! If you'll be celebrating the long weekend,
> >>>>>>> we hope you have a good one!
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> Lynne Bartholomew
> >>>>>>> RFC Production Center
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>> On Nov 26, 2025, at 9:05 AM, Lou Berger <[email protected]
> >>>>>>>> <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>> Looks good to me too - thank you!
> >>>>>>>> Lou
> >>>>>>>> ----------
> >>>>>>>> On November 25, 2025 1:36:45 PM Lynne Bartholomew
> >>>>>>>> <[email protected]
> >>>>>>>> <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>> Hi, Donald.
> >>>>>>>>> We have noted your approval on the AUTH48 status page:
> >>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9894 <https://www.rfc-
> >>>>>>>>> editor.org/auth48/rfc9894>
> >>>>>>>>> Thank you very much for your help with this document!
> >>>>>>>>> Lynne Bartholomew
> >>>>>>>>> RFC Production Center
> >>>>>>>>>> On Nov 25, 2025, at 9:55 AM, Donald Eastlake
> >>>>>>>>>> <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>>> Hi Lynne,
> >>>>>>>>>> I have reviewed this rfc-to-be and approve publication.
> >>>>>>>>>> Thanks,
> >>>>>>>>>> Donald
> >>>>>>>>>> ===============================
> >>>>>>>>>> Donald E. Eastlake 3rd +1-508-333-2270 (cell)
> >>>>>>>>>> 2386 Panoramic Circle, Apopka, FL 32703 USA
> >>>>>>>>>> [email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>
> >>>>>>>>>> On Mon, Nov 24, 2025 at 12:15 PM Lynne Bartholomew
> >>>>>>>>>> <[email protected]
> >>>>>>>>>> <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>>> Hi, Donald. We have changed "composed of" to "built on" per
> >>>>>>>>>> your note in email for RFC-to-be 9895:
> >>>>>>>>>>>> 1. Should "composed of" be changed to "built on" in RFC-
> >>>>>>>>>>>> to-be 9894
> >>>>>>>>>>>> as well, as was done per your first note further below for
> >>>>>>>>>>>> this
> >>>>>>>>>>>> document?
> >>>>>>>>>>>> From the latest rfc9894.txt:
> >>>>>>>>>>>> The extension defined in this document is composed of the
> >>>>>>>>>>>> mechanisms
> >>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>> Donald: Yes, I think the change should be made in RFC-to-be
> >>>>>>>>>>> 9894 as well.
> >>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>> The latest files are posted here. Please refresh your
> >>>>>>>>>> browser:
> >>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894.txt
> >>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894.txt>
> >>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894.pdf
> >>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894.pdf>
> >>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894.html
> >>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894.html>
> >>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894.xml
> >>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894.xml>
> >>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-diff.html
> >>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-diff.html>
> >>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-rfcdiff.html
> >>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-rfcdiff.html>
> >>>>>>>>>> (side by side)
> >>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-auth48diff.html
> >>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-auth48diff.html>
> >>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-
> >>>>>>>>>> auth48rfcdiff.html <https://www.rfc-
> >>>>>>>>>> editor.org/authors/rfc9894-auth48rfcdiff.html> (side by
> >>>>>>>>>> side)
> >>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-lastdiff.html
> >>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-lastdiff.html>
> >>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-lastrfcdiff.html
> >>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-
> >>>>>>>>>> lastrfcdiff.html> (side by side)
> >>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-xmldiff1.html
> >>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-xmldiff1.html>
> >>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-xmldiff2.html
> >>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-xmldiff2.html>
> >>>>>>>>>> Thank you!
> >>>>>>>>>> Lynne Bartholomew
> >>>>>>>>>> RFC Production Center
> >>>>>>>>>>> On Nov 17, 2025, at 11:24 AM, Lynne Bartholomew
> >>>>>>>>>>> <[email protected]
> >>>>>>>>>>> <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>>>> Hi, Donald. Thank you for your prompt reply! We have
> >>>>>>>>>>> updated this document per your notes below.
> >>>>>>>>>>> The latest files are posted here. Please refresh your
> >>>>>>>>>>> browser:
> >>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894.txt
> >>>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894.txt>
> >>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894.pdf
> >>>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894.pdf>
> >>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894.html
> >>>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894.html>
> >>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894.xml
> >>>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894.xml>
> >>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-diff.html
> >>>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-diff.html>
> >>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-rfcdiff.html
> >>>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-rfcdiff.html>
> >>>>>>>>>>> (side by side)
> >>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-auth48diff.html
> >>>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-
> >>>>>>>>>>> auth48diff.html>
> >>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-
> >>>>>>>>>>> auth48rfcdiff.html <https://www.rfc-
> >>>>>>>>>>> editor.org/authors/rfc9894-auth48rfcdiff.html> (side by
> >>>>>>>>>>> side)
> >>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-xmldiff1.html
> >>>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-xmldiff1.html>
> >>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-xmldiff2.html
> >>>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9894-xmldiff2.html>
> >>>>>>>>>>> Thanks again!
> >>>>>>>>>>> Lynne Bartholomew
> >>>>>>>>>>> RFC Production Center
> >>>>>>>>>>>> On Nov 16, 2025, at 6:37 PM, Donald Eastlake
> >>>>>>>>>>>> <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>>>>> Hi,
> >>>>>>>>>>>> On Fri, Nov 14, 2025 at 5:08 PM <[email protected]
> >>>>>>>>>>>> <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Authors,
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> resolve (as
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> necessary) the following questions, which are also in the
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> source
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> file.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> 1) <!-- [rfced] Document title: FYI, for ease of the
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> reader and per our
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> process, we expanded "DLEP" in the title. Please review.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Original:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> DLEP DiffServ Aware Credit Window Extension
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Currently:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Dynamic Link Exchange Protocol (DLEP) Diffserv Aware
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Credit Window
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Extension
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> -->
> >>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>> OK.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> 2) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> that appear in the
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> title) for use on <https://www.rfc-editor.org/search>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/search&gt;>. -->
> >>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>> I can't think of any other good keywords.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> 3) <!-- [rfced] For ease of the reader, we expanded "CLI"
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> where first
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> used, per Section 3.6 of RFC 7322 ("RFC Style Guide" -
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/rfc7322>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/rfc7322&gt;>). Please
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> review, and
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> let us know any objections.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> CLI: Command-Line Interface -->
> >>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>> Since it appears the "CLI" is used only once, I suggest
> >>>>>>>>>>>> deleting
> >>>>>>>>>>>> "(CLI)" and just saying "Command-Line Interface".
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> 4) <!-- [rfced] Section 3: We changed "the mismatch of
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> capabilities" to
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> "any mismatch in capabilities" per
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> draft-ietf-manet-dlep-ether-credit-extension. Please let
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> us know any
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> objections.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Original:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> In either case, the mismatch of capabilities SHOULD be
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> reported to the user via normal network management
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> mechanisms such as
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> user interface messages or error logging.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Currently:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> In either case, any mismatch in capabilities SHOULD be
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> reported to the user via normal network management
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> mechanisms, such
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> as user interface messages or error logging. -->
> >>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>> OK. Consistency with ether-credit-extension is good.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> 5) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language"
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> portion of the
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> online Style Guide at
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc-
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc-
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language&gt;>,
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> and let us know if any changes are needed. Updates of
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> this nature
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> typically result in more precise language, which is
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> helpful for
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> readers.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Note that our script did not flag any words in
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> particular, but this
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> should still be reviewed as a best practice. -->
> >>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>> I do not think any changes are needed for this reason.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> 6) <!-- [rfced] Please let us know if any changes are
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> needed for the
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> following:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> a) The following term was used inconsistently in this
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> document.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> We chose to use the latter form. Please let us know any
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> objections.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Sub-Data item / Sub-Data Item (as used elsewhere in this
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> document
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> and per the other documents in this group (Cluster 541 /
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/cluster_info.php?cid=C541
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/cluster_info.php?cid=C541>)
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> of documents)
> >>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>> Use of the all-caps version is fine.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> b) The following term appears to be used inconsistently
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> in this document.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Please let us know which form is preferred. (Note that we
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> updated "DiffServ"
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> to "Diffserv" in the document already.)
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> DiffServ Aware Credit Window Type Value /
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> DiffServ Aware Credit Window Extension Type Value -->
> >>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>> Probably best to go with the more explicit version
> >>>>>>>>>>>> including the word
> >>>>>>>>>>>> "Extension".
> >>>>>>>>>>>> Thanks,
> >>>>>>>>>>>> Donald
> >>>>>>>>>>>> ===============================
> >>>>>>>>>>>> Donald E. Eastlake 3rd +1-508-333-2270 (cell)
> >>>>>>>>>>>> 2386 Panoramic Circle, Apopka, FL 32703 USA
> >>>>>>>>>>>> [email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Thank you.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Lynne Bartholomew and Rebecca VanRheenen
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> RFC Production Center
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> On Nov 14, 2025, at 2:05 PM, [email protected]
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> <mailto:[email protected]> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> *****IMPORTANT*****
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Updated 2025/11/14
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> RFC Author(s):
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> >>>>>>>>>>>>> RFC Editor
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> --------------------------------------
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> RFC9894 (draft-ietf-manet-dlep-da-credit-extension-21)
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Title : DLEP DiffServ Aware Credit Window Extension
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Author(s) : B. Cheng, D. Wiggins, L. Berger, D. Eastlake
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> 3rd, Ed.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> WG Chair(s) : Don Fedyk, Ronald in 't Velt, Donald E.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Eastlake 3rd
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