Authors,

While reviewing this document during Final Review, please resolve (as 
necessary) the following questions, which are also in GitHub as issues 
<https://github.com/rfc-editor-drafts/FinalReview-rfc10008/issues>.

1) <!--[rfced] Abstract: We have added "QUERY requests" to the sentence below 
to clarify what this sentence refers to. Please review.

Original:
This is similar to POST requests but can be automatically repeated
or restarted without concern for partial state changes.

Current:
This is similar to POST requests, but QUERY requests can be automatically 
repeated
or restarted without concern for partial state changes.
--> 


2) <!--[rfced] May we adjust the sentence below as follows for readability
and replace "absent" with "without"?

Original:

   In this variation, however, it is not readily apparent - absent
   specific knowledge of the resource and server to which the request is
   being sent - that a safe, idempotent query is being performed.

Perhaps:

   However, in this variation, it is not readily apparent 
   that a safe, idempotent query is being performed (without
   specific knowledge of the resource and server to which the request is
   being sent).

-->


3) <!-- [rfced] Section 2.1: May we update the first and last items in the list 
below 
for consistency?
      
Original:

   The list below describes various cases of failures and recommends
   specific status codes:

   *  A request lacking media type information
      by definition is incorrect and needs to fail 
      with a 4xx status code such as 400 (Client Error).

   *  If a media type is specified...

   *  If a media type is specified...

   *  If the media type is specified...

   *  Finally, if the client requests a specific response media type
      using the Accept field ([HTTP], Section 12.5.1) which is not
      supported by the resource, a status code of 406 (Not Acceptable)
      is appropriate.

Perhaps:

   The list below describes various cases of failures and recommends
   specific status codes:

   *  If a request lacks media type information,
      it is incorrect by definition and needs to fail
      with a 4xx status code such as 400 (Client Error).

      ...

   *  If the client requests a specific response media type
      using the Accept field ([HTTP], Section 12.5.1) that is not
      supported by the resource, a status code of 406 (Not Acceptable)
      is appropriate.

-->


4) <!-- [rfced] How may we adjust the text below for readability?

Original:

   The _equivalent resource_ for any given QUERY request is a resource
   responding to GET requests, representing that QUERY request and its
   target, taking both message content and metadata into account
   (Section 6 of [HTTP]).   

Perhaps:

   The _equivalent resource_ for any given QUERY request is a resource
   that responds to GET requests, represents that QUERY request and its
   target, and takes both message content and metadata into account
   (Section 6 of [HTTP]).  

-->


5) <!-- [rfced] What is being "normalized" in the last two list items below?
Should these list items be updated accordingly for clarity? (Note that we 
have provided additional text for context.)

Original:

   To improve cache efficiency, caches MAY remove semantically
   insignificant differences first.  For instance, by:

   *  removing content encoding(s) (Section 8.4 of [HTTP]).

   *  normalizing based upon knowledge of format conventions, as
      indicated by any media subtype suffix in the request's Content-
      Type field (e.g., "+json", see Section 4.2.8 of [RFC6838]).

   *  normalizing based upon knowledge of the semantics of the content
      itself, as indicated by the request's Content-Type field.

-->


6) <!-- [rfced] Our understanding is that the WHATWG #links are not permanent 
(see 
https://authors.ietf.org/en/reference-style-guidance#web-hypertext-application-technology-working-group-whatwg).
  We do not see a request for the following #links to be made permanent on 
<https://github.com/whatwg/html/issues?q=is%3Aissue%20-state%3A%20permanent%20anchor>.
  For now, we have removed the #links and replaced them with section number and 
title.  Please let us know if you request permanent links. 

https://fetch.spec.whatwg.org/#methods
https://url.spec.whatwg.org/#application/x-www-form-urlencoded
-->


7) <!-- [rfced] Would you like the references to be alphabetized
or left in their current order? -->


8) <!-- [rfced] FYI - We have added expansions for abbreviations upon first use
per Section 3.6 of RFC 7322 ("RFC Style Guide"). Please review each
expansion in the document carefully to ensure correctness.
-->

9) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of the online 
Style Guide <https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language>
and let us know if any changes are needed.  Updates of this nature typically
result in more precise language, which is helpful for readers.

Note that our script did not flag any words in particular, but this should 
still be reviewed as a best practice.
-->

Thank you.

Kaelin Foody and Sandy Ginoza
RFC Production Center

On Jun 4, 2026, at 11:14 PM, [email protected] wrote:

*****IMPORTANT*****

RFC Author(s):
--------------

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