Hi Rebecca, > "Dual-stack name server” still only appears in Section 2. Is this > okay, or are further updates needed?
This is okay. > b) What do you think about the minor updates shown below (i.e., > moving “now” and updating “frequent” to “common”)? > > Original: > Yet, while it is observed that the first > zones becoming exclusively IPv6 resolvable, there is still a major > portion of zones solely relying on IPv4 [V6DNSRDY-23]. > > Current: > Yet, while the first zones that are exclusively IPv6 resolvable > can > be observed by now, exclusively IPv4 resolvable zones are > considerably more frequent [V6DNSRDY-23]. > > Perhaps: > Yet, while the first zones that are exclusively IPv6 resolvable > can > now be observed, exclusively IPv4 resolvable zones are > considerably more common [V6DNSRDY-23]. Thanks, 'Perhaps:' sounds like a good option. > c) In the updated text at the end of Section 4.3, should “address > family based namespace fragmentation” be revised as follows to align > with updates elsewhere in the document? That is, should this phrase > be updated to use “name space” (two words), use “partitioning” rather > than “fragmentation”, and recast to avoid awkward hyphenation? > > Current: > If this is not done, a client might select a > subset of recursive DNS servers that leads to address family based > namespace fragmentation. > > Perhaps: > If this is not done, a client might select a > subset of recursive DNS servers that leads to name space > partitioning due to > IP address family support. Yes, thank you, this one slipped through. > d) FYI - Once we finalize the questions above, we’ll need to ask the > AD to approve some changes that are “above editorial”. Thanks, and no worries. Please go ahead and reach out to the ADs. With best regards, Tobias -- My working day may not be your working day. Please do not feel obliged to reply to my email outside of your normal working hours. ----------------------------------------------------------------- Tobias Fiebig, Forschungsgruppe Internet Architecture (INET) Max-Planck-Institut für Informatik, Campus E14, 66123 Saarbrücken E1 4 - Raum 517 mobil: +31 616 80 98 99
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