Hi all,

> http://oooauthors.org/art/artproject/

I just uploaded a new variation:

http://oooauthors.org/art/artproject/new20_template-dc5.sxw/file_view

This is what I changed:

1) I think Janet's right. The thin bars don't look good at all. I went 
back to wider bars.

2) I put the chapter title on the bar, in Peter's style.

3) As suggested by Janet (or was it Jean?) I moved the OOoAuthors logo to 
the copyright page. I agree it fits better there. I tried to make it 
similar to how my physics textbook does it. I changed the OOoCopyright 
page style to have an extra-wide footer, and I put the logo there. I also 
added the OOoAuthors URL (right-indented).

4) Janet pointed out the absence of a "Chapter N". So there's no 
indication that the document is just a chapter from a larger work. I 
noticed we have a seemingly unused OOoChapter style. So I decided to grab 
it for this purpose. In the title page I added a "Chapter N" using this 
paragraph style.


I admit I'm not quite happy with the title page, but I don't know what to 
do with it. As for the copyright page, I think it's much improved. I think 
that putting the OOoAuthors logo there instead of the title cover was a 
good idea.

I also want to say that I liked Janet's reminder that white space is a 
perfectly good design element. I actually like a sparse, non-cluttered 
design.

Linda, please take a look at this design. Do you think I'm going in the 
right direction?  What would you change?

Cheers,
-- 
Daniel Carrera          | I don't want it perfect,
Join OOoAuthors today!  | I want it Tuesday.
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