Daniel Carrera wrote:
Hey,

Our SEO gal informs me that it's important to add the words Writer, Calc, Draw, Base, Math, and Impress on the main page. This is the current text:

  "OOoAuthors is the development site for OpenOffice.org documentation.
  If you wish to read documentation, please see our published chapters."

I'm having trouble comming up with an alternative. But here are some ideas:

1)
  OOoAuthors is a group of volunteers making documentation for
  OpenOffice.org Writer, Calc, Draw, Impress and Base. If you wish
  to *read* documentation, please see our [[published chapters]].

<daniel>This one has another nice keyword: volunteer</daniel>
2)
  OOoAuthors is a volunteer group making documentation for
  OpenOffice.org Writer, Calc, Draw, Impress and Base. If you wish
  to *read* documentation, please see our [[published chapters]].

<daniel>As above: volunteer</daniel>

3)
  OOoAuthors is the development site for OpenOffice.org documentation
  (including Writer, Calc, Draw, Impress and Base). If you wish to
  *read* documentation, please see our [[published chapters]].


I like (2) best, but I thought I'd ask here in case anyone has a brilliant idea. :-)

Cheers,
My Suggestion is:

OOoAuthours, the development site for OpenOffice.org documentation,
(Writer, Calc, Draw, Impress, and Base) invites you to read our published documentation at .........

Chris

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