Makes sense. Thanks for the quick reply.

Lou

Jean Hollis Weber wrote:

Lou Iorio wrote:

I am reviewing Formatting Pages (very well written, by the way), and have
come across references like this:

Some other uses are discussed in the chapter titled “Introduction to Styles”.

My inclination is to change this to:

Some other uses are discussed in  /Introduction to Styles/.

Ideally, /Introduction to Styles/ would be a hyper link.

I could not find this issue in the style guide or the writer guide.


These chapters are published standalone as well as part of a full book, so we needed to choose a style that fit both situations. I am a bit surprised that it isn't covered in either the style guide or writer guide, but lots of things got overlooked there. I must fix that!

When a chapter is read standalone, the style you suggest would not make it clear that it's referring to another chapter, and the hyperlink would not lead anywhere useful.

Normally I would include the chapter number, but those were changing during development of the book and writing of the individual chapter, and so we did not include.

But even without that consideration, at this point changing the style to remove the phrase "in the chapter titled" (or the short form "in the chapter" -- I'm happy to drop the word "titled") or add the chapter number, would make it inconsistent with the rest of the book.

When we revise the book in the new year, that would be a good time to make changes like this. I have a long list of book and consistency enhancements to be done at that time. I'll add this to that list. And one of these days I'll compile and organise the list and post it on the website. BTW, the revisions may be major -- we have ideas on reorganising the sequence of chapters, for example.

But I don't want to tackle any of that until we get a first edition of the other books done.

Regards, Jean


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