Very nice demo! Thanks for writing up the process, too. You don't need to worry too much about getting documentation like this out quickly (you mentioned this in the doc intro) -- there has been a need for a long time, and the need is not going away, either. You have given a good tutorial; I would recommend editing it (if it needs it), and posting it on the tutorial websites that are out there.
Also, a minor comment: mouse movement is *very* quick. . . I think reducing the speed of looking up/down would help, or else attaching a tween to the motion would make it more natural. (Perfecting was not your goal, of course.)
