> -----Message d'origine----- > De : david blanchard [mailto:[email protected]] > Envoyé : mardi 27 juillet 2010 18:25 > À : '[email protected]' > Objet : RE: [HackIt Bar] [Funding] Pitch > > > > > For the pitch, what about: > > > > An adventure that takes place on the real web, where the > player > > discovers that artificial intelligences are waking up. They > > offer to serve the player in exchange for his help. The > player > > will then team up with the AIs in their quest to gain more > > consciousness, by hacking websites and impacting the web. > > > > [David] While having a look at the IA gameplay, I was thinking about > the macro objective and came with the sentence below. Then I read this > mail again and realized that your sentence Xav is very close to mine > (good sign ;)). Can you let me know which sentence is better suited, or > if we should mix them and come with a third one ? > > The game takes place on the real web, where the player realizes that IA > are starting to emerge, and need his help in order to reach a state of > consciousness. In order to do this, the player will accomplish missions > for these IA and see them grow as he successes in the missions. While > doing so, he will also realise that this partnership is a fair deal, > because it progressively gives him some control over the web.
[David] Complement : according to me, my sentence is neither the pitch nor the macro-objective, it's more the general context that will be used to write the pitch (should give more perspective on the exp) and the objective (what/how/...). By the way, the gain of control on the web, I think, is currently a mean to help IAs, not a goal per se (we can come back later to making this a goal in later phases of the project eventually), do you share my view ? _______________________________________________ Hackit Bar mailing list - [email protected] Wiki: http://community.hackit.cx/ List: http://community.hackit.cx/ml/ Forum: http://community.hackit.cx/forum/ Ideas: http://community.hackit.cx/ideas/ IRC: irc://irc.freenode.net/#politis
