Hi Linda
ID Nits is showing many errors in the references used in the draft
(author-tools.ietf.org/api/idnits?url=https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-bess-bgp-sdwan-usage-09.txt<https://author-tools.ietf.org/api/idnits?url=https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-bess-bgp-sdwan-usage-09.txt>).
I think this is because there are differences in the format used for the
reference in the body text, and the bookmark in the references section is
different. For example:
== Missing Reference: 'RFC 4364' is mentioned on line 162, but not defined
But the references section says:
[RFC4364] E. rosen, Y. Rekhter, "BGP/MPLS IP Virtual Private
networks (VPNs)", Feb 2006.
There is no space between RFC and 4364.
Also, please can you fix all the other ID-Nits issues before I request
publication.
Thanks
Matthew
From: Linda Dunbar <[email protected]>
Date: Monday, 27 March 2023 at 08:07
To: Matthew Bocci (Nokia) <[email protected]>, [email protected]
<[email protected]>, [email protected]
<[email protected]>
Subject: RE: Document shepherd's review of draft-ietf-bess-bgp-sdwan-usage-07
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Matthew,
The revision based on your comments and suggestions has been uploaded:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-bess-bgp-sdwan-usage/
What is the next step for moving this draft forward to IESG?
Thank you.
Linda
From: Matthew Bocci (Nokia) <[email protected]>
Sent: Wednesday, March 22, 2023 8:23 PM
To: Linda Dunbar <[email protected]>; [email protected];
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Subject: Re: Document shepherd's review of draft-ietf-bess-bgp-sdwan-usage-07
Thanks Linda
This looks fine to me.
Regards
Matthew
From: Linda Dunbar
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Date: Tuesday, 21 March 2023 at 22:40
To: Matthew Bocci (Nokia)
<[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>>,
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Matthew,
Thank you very much for the detailed review. All your comments have been
addressed. Please see the attached changes. We will upload the revision next
Monday.
Thank you.
Linda
From: Matthew Bocci (Nokia)
<[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>>
Sent: Monday, March 20, 2023 7:01 AM
To: [email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>;
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Subject: Document shepherd's review of draft-ietf-bess-bgp-sdwan-usage-07
Authors,
As is customary, please find attached my documents shepherd’s review of
draft-ietf-bess-bgp-sdwan-usage-07.
There are a fair number of mostly editorial comments scattered throughout the
draft, prefixed by ‘MB>’.
Please treat these as you would any other WG last call comments.
Best regards
Matthew
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