Archaic wrote: > Okay, I killed 2 birds with one stone and added visudo and removed the > sed. However, I currently have no graphical browser with which to look > at the output before commit. The relevant page is at: > > http://linuxfromscratch.org/~archaic/blfs-book/postlfs/sudo.html > > The concern is that I added a NOTE box but can't see how it flows > visually. Comments would be appreciated before I commit (which will be > tomorrow as I'm dog tired). Also, that render doesn't include changelog > or general.ent changes since I'm not committing right now.
Looks OK to me, however I have a minor issue with the wording of the note: It is highly recommended to use... I know this is a common construct but I have always wonderd "Recommended by who?" By us? By the developers? By knowledegable users? In this case it is all of these, but how about: Most experienced administrators recomend using... Note that the '...to use...' is not proper here. -- Bruce -- http://linuxfromscratch.org/mailman/listinfo/blfs-dev FAQ: http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/blfs/faq.html Unsubscribe: See the above information page
