Ag. D. Hatzimanikas wrote these words on 03/07/08 17:31 CST:

> +
> +    <bridgehead renderas="sect3">Do I Need the Patch and do I have to enable
> +    graphics support?</bridgehead>

Because this is a Title, you should probably use Title capitalization.
(all words other than 'and', 'to' and 'the')


> +
> +      <para>In the text mode, <application>Links</application> cannot be

Perhaps just "In text mode"? Sounds better to me.



> +      configured to use UTF-8 encoding for the terminal input/output. This
> +      limitation renders <application>Links</application> useless as a
> +      text-based browser in UTF-8 locales. See general discussion of this
> +      type of issue in the <xref linkend="locale-not-valid-option"/> section
> +      on the <xref linkend="locale-issues"/> page.
> +      The patch fixes all these issues with an exception of Chinese locale,
> +      where there isn't available a character set.

Much better would be "where there isn't an available character set".


> +      Note: You have to check the "UTF-8 I/O" box in "Terminal options" and
> +      set the character set (probably a 8-bit) in the Setup menu.

Better is "probably an 8-bit"


> +   
> +   <para>If desired apply the patch:</para>

There should be a comma after desired. That sentence is two clauses.
Almost all sentences which begin with "If" need a comma to separate
the clauses. If this, then do that.


> +    
> +    <para><command>./gen-intl &amp;&amp; ./synclang</command>: These commands
> +    regenerate the languages table.</para>

I don't know for sure, but it probably should be "language tables"
or "language table". "languages table" sounds funny to me. But then
it technically may be correct as it is.

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