> >
> > Your model seems to be
> > pre-uplift (stage 0)
> > -> uplifting client (stages 1 to 4?)
> > -> indentured client (stage 5?)
> > Since stage has the same population, and assuming mortality is minimal,
> > each stage must take the same amount of time.
>
> Yes: the period where a species is under uplift may vary a lot, but
> it's said somewhere that the mean [median?] is 100k. And the
> period of indenture is explicitly stated as 100k.
>
> > My mental model is
> > pre-uplift (stage 0)
> > -> uplifting clients, this includes indenture (stages 1-5)
>
> Ok, but why do you join the indenture period with the uplift
> period? They are quite distinct phases.
>
> > The pre-uplift stage goes fast but has high "mortality" as the GUI denies
> > claims or proposed projects.  It is also irrelevant.  We do not worry
> > about pre-clients in this "census".
>
> Yes :-)
>
> > The mean term for uplift/indenture combined is 100KY
>
> No!!! The uplift process can be long or short, but the indenture period
> is fixed.

First, let me say that I am a bit embarassed to be having this conversation 
since it shows the degree to which I have denegrated into a Trekkie -- 
writing fan-fic is bad enough but I am about to indulge in proof-texting 
science fiction.  Of course, my embarasment is not enough to make me stop....

Note, I am working off of SeJ's Uplift 2nd ed.  I don't think DB has (or would 
need to) develop this little theme.  Still, for myself it would be nice to 
have this bit of background pinned down.

Alberto, your reading of the text that there are basically four gross phases 
of maturity (pre-uplift, uplift, indenture, full-maturity) seems reasonable.  
Even so, I do not think it was what SeJ intended.  I think that the uplift 
stage (stages 1-5), minor client, and indenture are all meant to be used as 
synonyms.  On Uplift 2nd ed p82 SeJ talks about indenture--that is to say 
being a minor client--in general. On p83 his intent is not to talk about a 
different stage in a species life-cycle, instead he just goes into more 
specific detail about what he just discussed on p82.

I cannot prove outright that SeJ did not mean to say that there was a stage of 
uplift minority followed by a stage of uplift indenture, b I can marshal 
circumstantial evidence that his intent was instead that uplift minority and 
indenture were in fact meant to be two words for the same thing.   

-- Had SeJ meant indenture to be a stage following uplift we would expect him 
to be quite explicit about it.  

---- The order of the passages would be different in the 2nd edition.  He 
would first talk about uplift THEN about indenture.  Furthermore, there would 
be a scentence in the passage about indenture to the effect "The period of 
uplift is paid off with a period of indenture."  (There is a passage that 
implies this, but it is in the glossare under 'indenture' and can be read as 
meaning that uplift is paid-off with services rendered during the process of 
uplift.)

---- There would somewhere be a reference to 100,000 years followed by another 
100,000 years or a reference to 200,000 years of subjegation somewhere in DB 
or SeJ.

-- When not practiced by wierdos like Humans, the 2nd edition allows for only 
about a 30% variation in the duration of uplift if we keep stage 5 at 50KY 
(and the book say 50KY is a *minimum.)  The minimum period is 83KY and the 
max is 105KY.  There is no need to posit a second 100KY because many species 
are uplifted really fast.

-- The indenture passage on p82 say that patrons can perform uplift 
manipulations on their indentured clients.  If the clients have completed 
their uplift then how can their patrons still perform uplift on them?

-- The Nahalli are reindentured to the Thennanin for punishment, and 
presumably rehabilitation.  This implies that the Nahalli are *NOT* subject 
to uplift as clients in their minority, but the Thennanin are responsible for 
the Nahalli.  The Thennanin have been cursed with an albatros--they cannot 
reform the Nahalli without uplift manipualiton.  (This might make sense if 
the Thennanin were the Nahalli's uplift consorts and are being punished 
rather than rewarded.)

-- When the Stoort free the Kaschan (their elders) and the Heebi (juniors) 
from the J'8lek, the Kaschan are indentured to their uplift consorts as were 
the Heebi, the Pargi.  Why?  Under your interpretation they were *indentured* 
this means that they must have finished or been absolved of further patron 
supervised uplift.  Why force them into an indenture?  If they go into 
indenture why not the trouble-making Stoort?


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