On Thu, May 30, 2013 at 8:28 PM, Christopher Sean Morrison
<[email protected]> wrote:

> I'm glad to hear that you are interested in feedback.  I presume you'd like
> the feedback in private since you didn't specifically state otherwise.  If
> you'd like it to be public, you are welcome to forward any response to the
> brlcad-devel mailing list.  On to your feedback...

I forget to write "public" here.
I will be glad if some one can learn from my mistakes.
and it is open source community why I remain private here.

> The technical detail in your proposal was good.  Overall, it's clear that
> you put a lot of time and effort into your proposal and it's an active area
> of interest.  Your proposal expanded on our idea well enough and you
> certainly seem to have a fully capable background.  You clearly have strong
> coding skills and have the potential for being a fantastic open source

Thanking you so much for your feedback.

> developer that we'd love to work with.  There was even a sponsoring
> developer interested and they were willing to mentor you.

Can I get a chance to work with developer now?
because I want to continue my work on proposal.

> So what went wrong?
>
> The biggest detriment to your application was your communication skills.
> Open source participation is *predominantly* about communication and this is
> an area that needed improvement.  Some of the language mistakes were easily
> attributed to English not being your proficiency and that by itself would
> have been JUST FINE and understandable.  However, the *style* of your
> writing exceptionally lacked attention to detail.  For example, you use
> uppercase seemingly randomly throughout and punctuation was very
> inconsistent.  Basically, this made your proposal seem very "messy".

I admit my mistakes.

<snip>
> This is not meant to be one-sided feedback.  If you have questions or
> comments of your own, please don't hesitate to engage me in discussion.
> Myself and other developers are more than happy to help you become a better
> developer.

This is my first attempt to involve with an open source community. I
want to learn more things and getting involved to such a good
community.

> For the near term, I urge you to learn to notice the inconsistencies in your
> writing (code or otherwise).  It sometimes takes time and practice if it's
> just something you just don't yet "see".  You might want to make yourself a
> checklist of things to consider when you write a piece of code like asking
> yourself whether the case and whitespace are consistent, making sure you
> compile, making sure you check placement of curly braces, comments,
> parentheses, commas, indentation, etc.  A good first step might be to try

I will take care of these things from now onwards.

-- 
Navdeep Bagga
Happy Bird
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