Hi Sarah,

thank you very much for your comments.
Please see my response in line.
I have updated webrev accordingly.

Thanks again !
Jan


On 04/21/09 14:59, Sarah Jelinek wrote:
> hi Jan,
>
> A few comments/questions:
>
> setup-sparc.sh:
>
> line 242: Would we ever have case where the service name isn't 
> specified in install.conf? Seems like this check is unnecessary.

You are right that it shouldn't happen during normal
working conditions. I have removed the check.

>
> line 247: This might be better worded something like:
>
> "To enable $svc_name for Sparc clients not explicitly associated with 
> another Sparc service you must override the system 
> /etc/netboot/wanboot.conf as follows:"

I agree that original wording deserves modification.
Looking at Joe's comments, he is suggesting slightly different wording:

echo "To select service $svc_name for those SPARC clients" \
     "use the following commands:"

This one is shorter, so I might prefer it, but please let me know
if it might be acceptable.

>
> setup-service.sh:
> line 281: How is this checking to see if the /etc/netboot/wanboot.conf 
> file refers to the specific wanboot.conf of the service we are deleting?

If service referred by /etc/netboot/wanboot.conf was deleted,
then symbolic link points to non-existent target.
Check on line 281 deletes that stale link.


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