Hi Sue,

thank you very much for your comments.
Please see my response in-line.
The webrev has been updated accordingly.

Jan



On 04/22/09 15:29, Susan Sohn wrote:
> Hi Jan,
>
> Just some minor comments on the updated webrev:
>
> setup-sparc
> -----------
> 92 (nit)
> referred -> referenced
> or you could also use
> referred -> pointed to

Changed.

>
> 240-245 Perhaps change the wording of:
>
> "Service $srv_dfl is currently used by SPARC" \
>      "clients not explicitly associated with another" \
>      "service by the use of the 'create-client' subcommand"
>
> to
>
> "Service $srv_dfl is currently being used by SPARC" \
>      "clients which have not explicitly been associated with another" \
>      "service via the 'create-client' subcommand."

Changed.

>
> and (nit) add a comma after clients in:
>
> "To select service $svc_name for those SPARC clients" \
>                       "use the following commands:"

Changed.

>
>
> setup-service
> -------------
> 259,268,273 Sparc-> SPARC

Changed.

>
> Thanks,
> Sue
>
>
>
> On 04/21/09 04:39, jan damborsky wrote:
>> Hi,
>>
>> could I please ask two people for reviewing changes for following 
>> blocker ?
>>
>> 8262 'installadm create-service' shouldn't overwrite 
>> /etc/netboot/wanboot.conf for Sparc, but notify user instead
>>
>> webrev:
>> http://cr.opensolaris.org/~dambi/bug-8262
>>
>> Thank you very much,
>> Jan
>>
>>
>> modules affected:
>> -----------------
>> * installadm tools (Sparc platform)
>>
>> testing done -  please see attached test procedures
>> ---------------------------------------------------
>>
>>
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>>
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