Sue,

thanks for review !

Jan


Susan Sohn wrote:
> Thanks, Jan, looks good now.
>
> Sue
>
> On 04/22/09 06:44, jan damborsky wrote:
>> Hi Sue,
>>
>> thank you very much for your comments.
>> Please see my response in-line.
>> The webrev has been updated accordingly.
>>
>> Jan
>>
>>
>>
>> On 04/22/09 15:29, Susan Sohn wrote:
>>> Hi Jan,
>>>
>>> Just some minor comments on the updated webrev:
>>>
>>> setup-sparc
>>> -----------
>>> 92 (nit)
>>> referred -> referenced
>>> or you could also use
>>> referred -> pointed to
>>
>> Changed.
>>
>>>
>>> 240-245 Perhaps change the wording of:
>>>
>>> "Service $srv_dfl is currently used by SPARC" \
>>>      "clients not explicitly associated with another" \
>>>      "service by the use of the 'create-client' subcommand"
>>>
>>> to
>>>
>>> "Service $srv_dfl is currently being used by SPARC" \
>>>      "clients which have not explicitly been associated with another" \
>>>      "service via the 'create-client' subcommand."
>>
>> Changed.
>>
>>>
>>> and (nit) add a comma after clients in:
>>>
>>> "To select service $svc_name for those SPARC clients" \
>>>                       "use the following commands:"
>>
>> Changed.
>>
>>>
>>>
>>> setup-service
>>> -------------
>>> 259,268,273 Sparc-> SPARC
>>
>> Changed.
>>
>>>
>>> Thanks,
>>> Sue
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> On 04/21/09 04:39, jan damborsky wrote:
>>>> Hi,
>>>>
>>>> could I please ask two people for reviewing changes for following 
>>>> blocker ?
>>>>
>>>> 8262 'installadm create-service' shouldn't overwrite 
>>>> /etc/netboot/wanboot.conf for Sparc, but notify user instead
>>>>
>>>> webrev:
>>>> http://cr.opensolaris.org/~dambi/bug-8262
>>>>
>>>> Thank you very much,
>>>> Jan
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> modules affected:
>>>> -----------------
>>>> * installadm tools (Sparc platform)
>>>>
>>>> testing done -  please see attached test procedures
>>>> ---------------------------------------------------
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> ------------------------------------------------------------------------ 
>>>>
>>>>
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>>
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