On 11/ 9/10 09:53 PM, Jack Schwartz wrote:
>   Hi Darren.
> 
> Here are a couple of follow-ups.  Resolved items are removed.
> 
> Looking forward to seeing the revised document...
>>> Page 10, end of section 3.3.1.3:  Is another bullet for "other tags
>>> handled by checkpoints" appropriate here?
>> I'm not sure I want to list all the tags that other checkpoints handle - this
>> should really be part of their design. I only included the DDU tags because 
>> they
>> are unique to AI, and we will be creating the new checkpoint as part of this
>> project.
>>
> I agree listing all tags that other checkpoints handle is not 
> appropriate.  I was asking for something else;  but when I look at it 
> now, it looks OK.

OK

>>
>>> Page 14, middle:  Under the "Expected, but not yet planned" section: I
>>> don't understand what "Adding of entries for sysidtool and sys-unconfig
>>> to run all known external applications" means and pertains to.  Can you
>>> please explain?
>> Honestly, I don't know - this is just a reference to the existing ICT in
>> usr/src/lib/libict_pymod/ict.py, which :
>>
>>          creates /etc/.sysidconfig.apps
>>          touches /etc/.UNCONFIGURED
>>          copy .sysIDtool.state to the target
>>
>> I don't know why this is necessary.
> OK.  The comment probably makes more sense within the ICT file / 
> context.  Without that context in the AI->CUD document, the comment 
> doesn't make as much sense.  To this end, I suggest changing the comment 
> to something like:
> 
> "Adding of entries for sysidtool and sys-unconfig to set up the system."
> 
> This seems specific enough to get the idea across while being general 
> enough to fit the context of this document.  What do you think?

Yes, I think that sounds better.

Thanks,

Darren.
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