Hi Darren.
I like how this doc keeps track of the many details that AI needs to manage.
Here are my comments.
General comment: Derived Manifests is not mentioned anywhere. While
not part of the AI->CUD project, it is part of AI. It will be a
checkpoint, and other checkpoints not part of AI->CUD are mentioned in
the document.
Page 7, top bullet, last sentence: can be clarified as "This project
will fully implement the new manifest design."
Nit: Section 3.3, 1st bullet, second sub-bullet: creating -> create
Nit: section 3.3, second bullet: starts -> start
Nit: Page 8, top: Isn't "Run the Install" the same as "STart the engint
to perform the installation" of the previous bullet?
Page 9: bottom: <add_drivers> has a <software> subtag as well as a
<search_all> subtag. <software> elements are used to explicitly specify
(driver) packages to install.
Page 10, end of section 3.3.1.3: Is another bullet for "other tags
handled by checkpoints" appropriate here?
Nit: 3.4.2: middle bullet: There are 2 periods at the end of the sentence.
Page 11, bullet near top: Same comment about <add_drivers> having a
<software> subtag as well as <search_all>.
Nit: 3.4.3. last sentence: "can them be" -> "can then be"
3.4.5 Is zpool is more appropriate than pool here?
Nit: 3.4.6, sentence below the "/persistent/desired" box:
"apply it to the system for real" -> "modify the system"
then start the next sentence with "Note: this is the first point..."
Nit: get rid of the "etc" bullet atop page 13.
Page 14, middle: Under the "Expected, but not yet planned" section: I
don't understand what "Adding of entries for sysidtool and sys-unconfig
to run all known external applications" means and pertains to. Can you
please explain?
Nit: page 15, grammatical changes to sentence above the bullets near the
bottom:
"For boot configuration, the ... required. Where something ...
platform, its (not it's) implementation... just be empty and do nothing."
3.5.2: AI will be using the Device Driver Utility Common Library
interfaces, PSARC/2009/602
Thanks,
Jack
On 10/22/10 09:14, Darren Kenny wrote:
Hi,
I'd like to ask for some feedback and review of the CUD-based AI implementation
by November 2nd.
The document can be got at:
http://hub.opensolaris.org/bin/download/Project+caiman/CUE_docs/AItoCUDDesign%2Dv0.1.pdf
Many thanks,
Darren.
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