* Tobias Kremer <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> [2008-06-17 08:40]: > I've incorporated some of the suggestions into the next version > of the mockup which can be found here: > > http://funkreich.de/catalyst/v2.png
Awesome. There are still nits, but you have already made those clear yourself, and it’s a huge improvement over the promising first draft, so I’m confident you’ll get there. > I'm still trying to figure out what goes where. I see nothing wrong with the placement of elements. > The texts and navigational elements aren't final either. Some nits: • Catalyst is not GPL, it’s under the Perl terms = GPL/Artistic. • “Web development” repeated in the slogan text; and I think there is no need to restrict the turbocharging claim to just *Perl* web development. I don’t have a bright idea for how to improve this just yet though. • The way the logo is watermarked on the header bar, it repeats right underneath the logo that’s already just above it. Makes for an odd effect. • “Developers” in the top navigation bar. Argh! :-) Maybe this could be something like “Repository”? (Unless, of course, you mean something else.) • The text in the left column: I don’t have a good suggestion off hand, but if you want, I can spend some time thinking about it. (Are you on IRC? We might confer/brainstorm a bit.) > Any feedback is greatly appreciated! I like it a lot. Keep going. Regards, -- Aristotle Pagaltzis // <http://plasmasturm.org/> _______________________________________________ List: [email protected] Listinfo: http://lists.scsys.co.uk/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/catalyst Searchable archive: http://www.mail-archive.com/[email protected]/ Dev site: http://dev.catalyst.perl.org/
