The bars are the main thing I'm not too sure about, they feel a bit "clunky" to me and I agree they need more work. I used Color Impact from http://www.tigercolor.com/ to work out the colour scheme so they should (in theory) be ok, but I will give them a rethink.
I'm not precious about my designs, I had that knocked out of me years ago, these days I actually apriciate constructive criticism :) On Fri, 11 Mar 2005 09:24:00 -0500, Tony Weeg <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > hmmm... > > 1. i like the menu alot > 2. im not sure i like the top and bottom bars. > 3. the colors are a bit off pitch, and im not sure how to say > that. imagine a singer singing, off-pitch (damn, i feel like simon cowell) > 4. its almost like the background is throwing me off, which may be why > the top and bottom bars are very HARD edged > > :( sorry if this is harsh, i assumed you wanted honesty. > tw > > On Fri, 11 Mar 2005 09:12:16 -0500, Larry C. Lyons > <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > > It looks pretty nice Wayne, here's what HTML tidy from the Web > > Developers plugins found one warning (you were missing a ; on an html > > entity). From a technical point of view the dropdown CSS menu is > > nicely done. > > > > larry > > > > > > On Fri, 11 Mar 2005 13:39:37 +0000, Wayne Putterill <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> > > wrote: > > > I thought it was finally time to get a site up advertising myself, > > > especially since I don't have any work on at the moment so I have the > > > time and a motive :) > > > > > > This is my first attempt, it's only a single page so far, I welcome > > > any comments on the design but also what do you think of the text? I'm > > > not sure if it's too relaxed, I tend to work with small businesses and > > > I wanted the site to be friendly and aproachable, but have I gone too > > > far... > > > > > > http://putterill.com/layout-1.html > > > > > > > > > > > > ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~| Discover CFTicket - The leading ColdFusion Help Desk and Trouble Ticket application http://www.houseoffusion.com/banners/view.cfm?bannerid=48 Message: http://www.houseoffusion.com/lists.cfm/link=i:5:150211 Archives: http://www.houseoffusion.com/cf_lists/threads.cfm/5 Subscription: http://www.houseoffusion.com/lists.cfm/link=s:5 Unsubscribe: http://www.houseoffusion.com/cf_lists/unsubscribe.cfm?user=89.70.5 Donations & Support: http://www.houseoffusion.com/tiny.cfm/54
