thank you. I'll be looking into your suggestions this evening, tw On Wednesday, May 13, 2009, Judah McAuley <[email protected]> wrote: > > Not too bad. I like the use of the serif font, it seems very > lawyerish. The top half of the page is very visual but doesn't say > anything about what the company does. On my laptop, I have to scroll > in order to see that they are lawyers. The rest of it is enough that I > would probably understand that they are lawyers anyway, but I like a > nice blatant strong lead on a home page that says front and center, > This is who we are and what we do very simply. > > There is a fair bit of inline styling that ought to get pulled up into > a css file. If you can take the time to do it, I'd pull the text out > from the images that explains what they do. Litigation Services (auto > accidents, construction disputes, etc) really ought to be text that a > search engine can read because it is fundamentally what these dudes > do. I'd search for "construction dispute lawyer" if I had a > construction dispute and they need that text to come up. You can still > use those colored boxes as backgrounds and lay the text atop it and > look very much the same. > > You should also take a look at the accessibility of the site. Its not > a huge deal right now but it is becoming more of an issue and lawyers > really ought to be ahead of the curve if possible since there will be > a bunch of legal issues arising as a result. Start by double checking > all your alt tags, I'd group together your navigation (offscreen if > necessary), and make sure that everything works without JS. > > You'd be helped out with the accessibility issue if you pulled the > text out from those colored boxes as well. The Business Planning and > Estate Planning are kind of low contrast and coupled with a small font > could make it difficult to read, especially for the target audience of > old people looking to get their estate in order. > > That's it for now. Nice looking site all in all. Very professional and > non-threatening. > > Judah > > On Tue, May 12, 2009 at 6:42 PM, Tony <[email protected]> wrote: >> >> can i get the mark henderson take on my newest site :) >> >> http://www.salisburycorporatelaw.com/live.cfm >> >> thanks :) >> tw >> >> > >
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