Wow Jerry, thanks very much for such a concise critique. I really do appreciate it.
On Thu, Jan 7, 2010 at 5:04 PM, Jerry Johnson <[email protected]> wrote: > > The first time I looked at it (about an hour ago), I thought the image > upper > right, and the red of the masthead logo were too bright. > > The rest of the page (nav menu, boxes, text, etc) seemed washed out. Too > washed out. > > Second look, it seems less washed out. the body copy is still pretty poor > contrast against the background color, but readable (less than I would > like, > though). > > The rounded corners on the widgets I like. > The blueprint jutting into the center gutter on the home page I really > like. > "To Do For Event" seems awkward phrasing. I had to read it 3 times to get > the jist. > The "Serving Your Community" is tough to read. The wash out of the color > image behind it bugs me somehow. It offends my eye (but not sure why). > Not in love with the color of visited links (standard browser purple). > LOVE LOVE LOVE the paper clip in the upper corner. I'd love to see that > content change OVER TIME to reflect changes in important content on the > site. > Like the overall rounded corners. > Wasn't in love with the blue frame inside the white on each page. Felt like > the light blue ribbons they always sewed into old lace doilies back in the > Victorian times. Then I realized why I hated it: the curtains in my old > trailer - > http://picasaweb.google.com/jmiloj/NewTrailerOct2007#5230369216127915618. > So > now I am ok with it. > > I want the map to be clickable on the home page. > I really wanted the 3 photo images in the left column to be a scrolling > gallery of more images. I clicked twice around there hoping.... > I wanted the masthead/logo in the upper left to be clickable to take me > back > to the home page. > > The text is sharp and crisp. The pages load lightning fast. Readable. > Legible. > > The URLS are ok. readable, and the folder structure gives me some > waymarking. > > Overall, very nice. > > On Thu, Jan 7, 2010 at 4:45 PM, Erika L. Rich <[email protected]> wrote: > > > > > Love it. > > > > On Thu, Jan 7, 2010 at 3:19 PM, Medic <[email protected]> wrote: > > > > > > > > Weegs started a trend here. I'd love a bit o' feedback as well. > > > This hasn't been one of my most exciting projects. > > > > > > http://tinyurl.com/ylnmq3q > > > <http://www.remaxevents.com/> > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~| Want to reach the ColdFusion community with something they want? Let them know on the House of Fusion mailing lists Archive: http://www.houseoffusion.com/groups/cf-community/message.cfm/messageid:310111 Subscription: http://www.houseoffusion.com/groups/cf-community/subscribe.cfm Unsubscribe: http://www.houseoffusion.com/cf_lists/unsubscribe.cfm?user=11502.10531.5
