Great feedback Judah. Between this and the others I should be able to make it more cohesive. I couldn't put my finger on what I'd done wrong, but you've all helped me see what has been staring me in the face.
On Thu, Jan 7, 2010 at 5:37 PM, Judah McAuley <[email protected]> wrote: > > Overall, it is a nice, clean corporate site. I found the default font > size to be a bit too small, personally. It looks more like text and > less like words if that makes sense. I just see blocks of text, not > individual words that jump out at me to read them. > > On the home page, I think that the contrast of the text over the grey > background is too low. It doesn't really "pop". The text, in general, > could use a bit more line spacing I think to reduce the perceived > density, especially on pages with a lot of words. > > It should be FAQs, not FAQ's, it is plural, not possessive. > > The navigation bar is nice on its own but when combined with the > red/blue/white of the logo on the masthead, it really looks just like > my Costco card. That might be fine, but just telling you what it makes > me think of. > > A really pretty nice, clean design. The main issues that jump out at > me is that the major visual elements (the masthead, the photos, etc) > are very high contrast but the text isn't, so it encourages me to > glance over the pages and look at the pretty things but not actually > read the content. If you can increase the contrast in the content and > perhaps space it out a bit more, it might encourage more visual > interaction with the text. > > Cheers, > Judah > > I agree with Jerry about the paper clip, that's a really nice visual > element and could be used for a lot of things. > > On Thu, Jan 7, 2010 at 12:19 PM, Medic <[email protected]> wrote: > > > > Weegs started a trend here. I'd love a bit o' feedback as well. > > This hasn't been one of my most exciting projects. > > > > http://tinyurl.com/ylnmq3q > > <http://www.remaxevents.com/> > > ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~| Want to reach the ColdFusion community with something they want? Let them know on the House of Fusion mailing lists Archive: http://www.houseoffusion.com/groups/cf-community/message.cfm/messageid:310118 Subscription: http://www.houseoffusion.com/groups/cf-community/subscribe.cfm Unsubscribe: http://www.houseoffusion.com/cf_lists/unsubscribe.cfm?user=11502.10531.5
