Well fine. Next time I'll say more than 2 words. :P ;) One thing I did not notice - is are they doing any Social Media integration? Facebook Groups, etc? Because I see a distinct lack of any of that in the design. Might be something to bring up to them or consider. Since it is the way to go these days ...
On Thu, Jan 7, 2010 at 5:24 PM, Medic <[email protected]> wrote: > > Wow Jerry, thanks very much for such a concise critique. I really do > appreciate it. > > > On Thu, Jan 7, 2010 at 5:04 PM, Jerry Johnson <[email protected]> wrote: > > > > > The first time I looked at it (about an hour ago), I thought the image > > upper > > right, and the red of the masthead logo were too bright. > > > > The rest of the page (nav menu, boxes, text, etc) seemed washed out. Too > > washed out. > > > > Second look, it seems less washed out. the body copy is still pretty poor > > contrast against the background color, but readable (less than I would > > like, > > though). > > > > The rounded corners on the widgets I like. > > The blueprint jutting into the center gutter on the home page I really > > like. > > "To Do For Event" seems awkward phrasing. I had to read it 3 times to get > > the jist. > > The "Serving Your Community" is tough to read. The wash out of the color > > image behind it bugs me somehow. It offends my eye (but not sure why). > > Not in love with the color of visited links (standard browser purple). > > LOVE LOVE LOVE the paper clip in the upper corner. I'd love to see that > > content change OVER TIME to reflect changes in important content on the > > site. > > Like the overall rounded corners. > > Wasn't in love with the blue frame inside the white on each page. Felt > like > > the light blue ribbons they always sewed into old lace doilies back in > the > > Victorian times. Then I realized why I hated it: the curtains in my old > > trailer - > > http://picasaweb.google.com/jmiloj/NewTrailerOct2007#5230369216127915618 > . > > So > > now I am ok with it. > > > > I want the map to be clickable on the home page. > > I really wanted the 3 photo images in the left column to be a scrolling > > gallery of more images. I clicked twice around there hoping.... > > I wanted the masthead/logo in the upper left to be clickable to take me > > back > > to the home page. > > > > The text is sharp and crisp. The pages load lightning fast. Readable. > > Legible. > > > > The URLS are ok. readable, and the folder structure gives me some > > waymarking. > > > > Overall, very nice. > > > > On Thu, Jan 7, 2010 at 4:45 PM, Erika L. Rich <[email protected]> > wrote: > > > > > > > > Love it. > > > > > > On Thu, Jan 7, 2010 at 3:19 PM, Medic <[email protected]> wrote: > > > > > > > > > > > Weegs started a trend here. I'd love a bit o' feedback as well. > > > > This hasn't been one of my most exciting projects. > > > > > > > > http://tinyurl.com/ylnmq3q > > > > <http://www.remaxevents.com/> > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~| Want to reach the ColdFusion community with something they want? Let them know on the House of Fusion mailing lists Archive: http://www.houseoffusion.com/groups/cf-community/message.cfm/messageid:310112 Subscription: http://www.houseoffusion.com/groups/cf-community/subscribe.cfm Unsubscribe: http://www.houseoffusion.com/cf_lists/unsubscribe.cfm?user=89.70.5
