Meem wrote:

 >This is great, thanks for writing this up.

Agreed, this looks good, my comments are below.

A high level comment is that the document dives straight in to talking 
about datalink interfaces. It would be really nice if we could point 
readers to the Network Link Names Overview document here:

http://www.opensolaris.org/os/project/clearview/docs/vnameoverview.pdf

This is another really good document and with the direction things have 
gone and are going almost essential reading.

What's meant by generally here, "It generally gives administrators 
flexibility in how they assign names to network interfaces.".  It sounds 
like there might be cases where it's not possible or that there are 
restrictions on naming. This might be a good place to call out the 
naming restrictions.

Maybe instead of specifying 3 main benefits it might be better to just 
have the main benefits? Calling out 3 main benefits almost leaves me 
looking for what the other smaller benefits might be.

In the paragraph starting, "The next step is to create the VLAN links on 
top of this aggregation.", s/parallel/parallel/.

In example 2 when you show the cfgadm example it might be nice to  show 
where PCI8 came from as well.

 >Migrating the zone as required would be impossible, as the name of the 
network interface is embedded in the zone >configuration

I agree with Meem here. Is it impossible or just much harder to do? 
Wouldn't you have to run zonecfg and reconfigure networking or would the 
whole thing break?

In some ways I think it would be worth moving some of the conclusions to 
earlier in the document but also expanding it to mention that if you 
just start renaming things without planning then you'll likely break 
things. It's obvious but I'm sure we've all run some commands only to 
then realize that we've just created a big problem.

Phil

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