vtlim commented on code in PR #16953:
URL: https://github.com/apache/druid/pull/16953#discussion_r1755205671


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docs/tutorials/tutorial-sketches-theta.md:
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@@ -60,9 +60,11 @@ In this tutorial, you will learn how to do the following:
 
 ## Prerequisites
 
-For this tutorial, you should have already downloaded Druid as described in
-the [single-machine quickstart](index.md) and have it running on your local 
machine.
-It will also be helpful to have finished [Tutorial: Loading a 
file](../tutorials/tutorial-batch.md) and [Tutorial: Querying 
data](../tutorials/tutorial-query.md).
+Before proceeding, download Druid as described in the [single-machine 
quickstart](index.md) and have it running on your local machine. You don't need 
to load any data into the Druid cluster.
+
+It's helpful to have finished [Tutorial: Loading a 
file](../tutorials/tutorial-batch.md) and [Tutorial: Querying 
data](../tutorials/tutorial-query.md).
+
+## Sample Data

Review Comment:
   Sentence case



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docs/tutorials/tutorial-sketches-theta.md:
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@@ -95,103 +97,29 @@ date,uid,show,episode
 
 ## Ingest data using Theta sketches
 
-1. Navigate to the **Load data** wizard in the web console.
-2. Select `Paste data` as the data source and paste the given data:
-
-![Load data view with pasted data](../assets/tutorial-theta-01.png)
-
-3. Leave the source type as `inline` and click **Apply** and **Next: Parse 
data**.
-4. Parse the data as CSV, with included headers:
-
-![Parse raw data](../assets/tutorial-theta-02.png)
-
-5. Accept the default values in the **Parse time**, **Transform**, and 
**Filter** stages.
-6. In the **Configure schema** stage, enable rollup and confirm your choice in 
the dialog. Then set the query granularity to `day`.
-
-![Configure schema for rollup and query 
granularity](../assets/tutorial-theta-03.png)
-
-7. Add the Theta sketch during this stage. Select **Add metric**.
-8. Define the new metric as a Theta sketch with the following details:
-   * **Name**: `theta_uid`
-   * **Type**: `thetaSketch`
-   * **Field name**: `uid`
-   * **Size**: Accept the default value, `16384`.
-   * **Is input theta sketch**: Accept the default value, `False`.
-
-![Create Theta sketch metric](../assets/tutorial-theta-04.png)
-
-9. Click **Apply** to add the new metric to the data model.
-
-
-10. You are not interested in individual user ID's, only the unique counts. 
Right now, `uid` is still in the data model. To remove it, click on the `uid` 
column in the data model and delete it using the trashcan icon on the right:
-
-![Delete uid column](../assets/tutorial-theta-05.png)
-
-11. For the remaining stages of the **Load data** wizard, set the following 
options:
-    * **Partition**: Set **Segment granularity** to `day`.
-    * **Tune**: Leave the default options.
-    * **Publish**: Set the datasource name to `ts_tutorial`.
-
-On the **Edit spec** page, your final input spec should match the following:
-
-```json
-{
-  "type": "index_parallel",
-  "spec": {
-    "ioConfig": {
-      "type": "index_parallel",
-      "inputSource": {
-        "type": "inline",
-        "data": "date,uid,show,episode\n2022-05-19,alice,Game of 
Thrones,S1E1\n2022-05-19,alice,Game of Thrones,S1E2\n2022-05-19,alice,Game of 
Thrones,S1E1\n2022-05-19,bob,Bridgerton,S1E1\n2022-05-20,alice,Game of 
Thrones,S1E1\n2022-05-20,carol,Bridgerton,S1E2\n2022-05-20,dan,Bridgerton,S1E1\n2022-05-21,alice,Game
 of Thrones,S1E1\n2022-05-21,carol,Bridgerton,S1E1\n2022-05-21,erin,Game of 
Thrones,S1E1\n2022-05-21,alice,Bridgerton,S1E1\n2022-05-22,bob,Game of 
Thrones,S1E1\n2022-05-22,bob,Bridgerton,S1E1\n2022-05-22,carol,Bridgerton,S1E2\n2022-05-22,bob,Bridgerton,S1E1\n2022-05-22,erin,Game
 of Thrones,S1E1\n2022-05-22,erin,Bridgerton,S1E2\n2022-05-23,erin,Game of 
Thrones,S1E1\n2022-05-23,alice,Game of Thrones,S1E1"
-      },
-      "inputFormat": {
-        "type": "csv",
-        "findColumnsFromHeader": true
-      }
-    },
-    "tuningConfig": {
-      "type": "index_parallel",
-      "partitionsSpec": {
-        "type": "hashed"
-      },
-      "forceGuaranteedRollup": true
-    },
-    "dataSchema": {
-      "dataSource": "ts_tutorial",
-      "timestampSpec": {
-        "column": "date",
-        "format": "auto"
-      },
-      "dimensionsSpec": {
-        "dimensions": [
-          "show",
-          "episode"
-        ]
-      },
-      "granularitySpec": {
-        "queryGranularity": "day",
-        "rollup": true,
-        "segmentGranularity": "day"
-      },
-      "metricsSpec": [
-        {
-          "name": "count",
-          "type": "count"
-        },
-        {
-          "type": "thetaSketch",
-          "name": "theta_uid",
-          "fieldName": "uid"
-        }
-      ]
-    }
-  }
-}
-```
+Load the sample dataset using the [`INSERT 
INTO`](../multi-stage-query/reference.md/#insert) statement and the 
[`EXTERN`](../multi-stage-query/reference.md/#extern-function) function to 
ingest the sample data inline. In the [Druid web 
console](../operations/web-console.md), go to the **Query** view and run the 
following query:
 
-Notice the `theta_uid` object in the `metricsSpec` list, that defines the 
`thetaSketch` aggregator on the `uid` column during ingestion.
 
-Click **Submit** to start the ingestion.
+```sql
+INSERT INTO "ts_tutorial"
+WITH "source" AS (SELECT * FROM TABLE(
+  EXTERN(
+    '{"type":"inline","data":"date,uid,show,episode\n2022-05-19,alice,Game of 
Thrones,S1E1\n2022-05-19,alice,Game of Thrones,S1E2\n2022-05-19,alice,Game of 
Thrones,S1E1\n2022-05-19,bob,Bridgerton,S1E1\n2022-05-20,alice,Game of 
Thrones,S1E1\n2022-05-20,carol,Bridgerton,S1E2\n2022-05-20,dan,Bridgerton,S1E1\n2022-05-21,alice,Game
 of Thrones,S1E1\n2022-05-21,carol,Bridgerton,S1E1\n2022-05-21,erin,Game of 
Thrones,S1E1\n2022-05-21,alice,Bridgerton,S1E1\n2022-05-22,bob,Game of 
Thrones,S1E1\n2022-05-22,bob,Bridgerton,S1E1\n2022-05-22,carol,Bridgerton,S1E2\n2022-05-22,bob,Bridgerton,S1E1\n2022-05-22,erin,Game
 of Thrones,S1E1\n2022-05-22,erin,Bridgerton,S1E2\n2022-05-23,erin,Game of 
Thrones,S1E1\n2022-05-23,alice,Game of Thrones,S1E1"}',
+    '{"type":"csv","findColumnsFromHeader":true}'
+  )
+) EXTEND ("date" VARCHAR, "show" VARCHAR, "episode" VARCHAR, "uid" VARCHAR))
+SELECT
+  TIME_FLOOR(TIME_PARSE("date"), 'P1D') AS "__time",
+  "show",
+  "episode",
+  COUNT(*) AS "count",
+  DS_THETA("uid") AS "theta_uid"
+FROM "source"
+GROUP BY 1, 2, 3
+PARTITIONED BY DAY
+```
+
+Notice how there is no `uid` in the `SELECT` statement. In this scenario you 
are not interested in individual user ID's, only the unique counts. Instead you 
use the `DS_THETA` aggregator function to create a Theta sketch on the values 
of `uid`. The 
[`DS_THETA`](../development/extensions-core/datasketches-theta.md#aggregator) 
function has an optional second parameter, `size`, which accepts a positive 
integer-power of 2 greater than 0. The `size` parameter refers to the maximum 
number of entries the Theta sketch object retains. Higher values of `size`  
result in higher accuracy, but require more space. The default value of `size` 
is 16384, and is recommended in most use cases. The `GROUP BY` statement groups 
the entries for each episode of a show watched on the same day.

Review Comment:
   ```suggestion
   Notice that there is no `uid` in the `SELECT` statement.
   In this scenario you are not interested in individual user IDs, only the 
unique counts.
   Instead you create Theta sketches on the values of `uid` using the 
`DS_THETA` function.
   
[`DS_THETA`](../development/extensions-core/datasketches-theta.md#aggregator) 
has an optional second parameter that controls the accuracy and size of the 
sketches.
   The `GROUP BY` statement groups the entries for each episode of a show 
watched on the same day.
   ```
   
   Comments:
   * For a large paragraph it's better to separate them into multiple lines for 
easier tracking and version control
   * We don't need to go into so much detail for `size` in a tutorial



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docs/tutorials/tutorial-sketches-theta.md:
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@@ -256,7 +181,10 @@ SELECT THETA_SKETCH_ESTIMATE(
 FROM ts_tutorial
 ```
 
-![Count distinct with Theta sketches and 
filters](../assets/tutorial-theta-08.png)
+The `APPROX_COUNT_DISTINCT_DS_THETA` function applies the following:
+
+* `DS_THETA`: Creates a new Theta sketch from the column of Theta sketches.
+* `THETA_SKETCH_ESTIMATE`: Calculates the distinct count estimate from the 
output of `DS_THETA` where the show is _Bridgerton_.

Review Comment:
   >where the show is _Bridgerton_.
   
   Shouldn't be in this description. The FILTER part doesn't belong to 
THETA_SKETCH_ESTIMATE



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docs/tutorials/tutorial-sketches-theta.md:
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@@ -274,7 +202,7 @@ SELECT THETA_SKETCH_ESTIMATE(
 FROM ts_tutorial
 ```
 
-![Count distinct with Theta sketches, filters, and set 
operations](../assets/tutorial-theta-09.png)

Review Comment:
   Why did you delete these three images?
   
   
![image](https://github.com/user-attachments/assets/f4f060b9-4dc6-4357-a0b4-81cbbd8d95a7)
   



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docs/tutorials/tutorial-sketches-theta.md:
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@@ -209,36 +137,23 @@ Let's first see what the data looks like in Druid. Run 
the following SQL stateme
 SELECT * FROM ts_tutorial
 ```
 
-![View data with SELECT all query](../assets/tutorial-theta-06.png)
+![View data with SELECT all query](../assets/tutorial-theta-03.png)
 
 The Theta sketch column `theta_uid` appears as a Base64-encoded string; behind 
it is a bitmap.
 
-The following query to compute the distinct counts of user IDs uses 
`APPROX_COUNT_DISTINCT_DS_THETA` and groups by the other dimensions:
-```sql
-SELECT __time,
-       "show",
-       "episode",
-       APPROX_COUNT_DISTINCT_DS_THETA(theta_uid) AS users
-FROM   ts_tutorial
-GROUP  BY 1, 2, 3
-```
-
-![Count distinct with Theta sketches](../assets/tutorial-theta-07.png)
-
-In the preceding query, `APPROX_COUNT_DISTINCT_DS_THETA` is equivalent to 
calling `DS_THETA` and `THETA_SKETCH_ESIMATE` as follows:
+The following query uses `THETA_SKETCH_ESTIMATE` to compute the distinct 
counts of user IDs and groups by the other dimensions:
 
 ```sql
-SELECT __time,
-       "show", 
-       "episode",
-       THETA_SKETCH_ESTIMATE(DS_THETA(theta_uid)) AS users
-FROM   ts_tutorial
-GROUP  BY 1, 2, 3
+SELECT
+  __time,
+  "show",
+  "episode",
+  THETA_SKETCH_ESTIMATE(theta_uid) AS users
+FROM ts_tutorial
+GROUP BY 1, 2, 3, 4

Review Comment:
   Double check SQL standard on this. I don't think you need the GROUP BY since 
you're just selecting and applying a scalar function. When I try the query 
without GROUP BY, I get the same thing.



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