Jennifer88huang commented on a change in pull request #5038: [doc] Improve 
Pulsar security-tls-authentication
URL: https://github.com/apache/pulsar/pull/5038#discussion_r317527967
 
 

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 File path: site2/docs/security-tls-authentication.md
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 @@ -6,15 +6,16 @@ sidebar_label: Authentication using TLS
 
 ## TLS Authentication Overview
 
-TLS authentication is an extension of [TLS transport 
encryption](security-tls-transport.md), but instead of only servers having keys 
and certs which the client uses to verify the server's identity, clients also 
have keys and certs which the server uses to verify the client's identity. You 
must have TLS transport encryption configured on your cluster before you can 
use TLS authentication. This guide assumes you already have TLS transport 
encryption configured.
+TLS authentication is an extension of [TLS transport 
encryption](security-tls-transport.md). Not only servers have keys and certs 
that the client uses to verify the server's identity, clients also have keys 
and certs that the server uses to verify the client's identity. You must have 
TLS transport encryption configured on your cluster before you can use TLS 
authentication. This guide assumes you already have TLS transport encryption 
configured.
 
-### Creating client certificates
+### Creat client certificates
 
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