Jennifer88huang commented on a change in pull request #5038: [doc] Improve Pulsar security-tls-authentication URL: https://github.com/apache/pulsar/pull/5038#discussion_r317534845
########## File path: site2/docs/security-tls-authentication.md ########## @@ -69,9 +70,9 @@ authenticationProviders=org.apache.pulsar.broker.authentication.AuthenticationPr ### ... on Proxies -To configure proxies to authenticate clients, put the folling in `proxy.conf`, alongside [the configuration to enable tls transport](security-tls-transport.md#proxy-configuration): +To configure proxies to authenticate clients, put the following in `proxy.conf`, alongside [the configuration to enable tls transport](security-tls-transport.md#proxy-configuration): -The proxy should have its own client key pair for connecting to brokers. The role token for this key pair should be configured in the ``proxyRoles`` of the brokers. See the [authorization guide](security-authorization.md) for more details. +The proxy should have its own client key pair for connecting to brokers. You need to configure the role token for this key pair in the ``proxyRoles`` of the brokers. See the [authorization guide](security-authorization.md) for more details. Review comment: well done! ---------------------------------------------------------------- This is an automated message from the Apache Git Service. To respond to the message, please log on to GitHub and use the URL above to go to the specific comment. For queries about this service, please contact Infrastructure at: [email protected] With regards, Apache Git Services
